I totally love it It’s perfect They both help each other when needed the most I hope David reconcile with his parents soon Keep updating author
2020-10-04
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Athena
May I suggest author? The Female lead here is stronger than the male lead. He is too soft to Grace. Maybe Make Him a little tougher. A man with great composure. Though the female lead is strong, don't let the male lead become too submissive with the female lead. Let him show his strength. He is intelligent as you say in the previous episode. Make his character more matured now. Make him use his intelligence as his greatest weapon to defeat the impostor without qsking help with the female lead to prove also his worth as the future son in law of the Smith Family. 😊
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Zak
I totally love it
It’s perfect
They both help each other when needed the most
I hope David reconcile with his parents soon
Keep updating author
2020-10-04
2
Athena
May I suggest author? The Female lead here is stronger than the male lead. He is too soft to Grace. Maybe Make Him a little tougher. A man with great composure. Though the female lead is strong, don't let the male lead become too submissive with the female lead. Let him show his strength. He is intelligent as you say in the previous episode. Make his character more matured now. Make him use his intelligence as his greatest weapon to defeat the impostor without qsking help with the female lead to prove also his worth as the future son in law of the Smith Family. 😊
2020-10-04
1