Embracing The Shadows / Taekook
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Moonie
Can I ask something?
Uhm, I am not going too brutal with the story right? I mean, I kind of am, but is it crossing the limits?
Moonie
Also, addressing this again..the comment section is pretty contrasting, and I like that. The characters are similar to the comment section, all having difficulty views on the situation. We have only figured out one part of the comment section with some characters. Now it's time to unravel the other one.
Moonie
I am a fair author, and I respect every opinion. That's why, no side will be left untouched. We shall hear every possible outcomes and thoughts!
[Ps: I had the contrasting conversations planned in my mind from each character's perspective, but didn't expect it to be displayed on the comment section. It was a great encouragement to continue my thoughts.]
Comments
◆◇♛𝙸'ᴍ𝕡єʀƒєƈт-𝕡ʀєƒєƈт♛◆◇
And well, what about all other emotions you've been portraying all so well in this story? Not every story needs a proper love plot to be a success, dear.. and it's completely okay if yours doesn't have one, or is a slow burn as compared to other fast-paced stories in terms of romance and love. Yes there are ships.. but just because you've used Taekook, Yoonjinseok and Minimoni as ships here, doesn't necessarily render the need for constructing a sole love plot just for them, love can still happen along the lines as the story progresses, even if the story is focused on a completely different theme.. isn't that exactly what you've been doing? While you've devoted a considerable amount of time and focus on portraying all the other main elements of the story properly, you haven't ignored love in the process, have you? Along with the other elements, you've thrown light on the concept of love as a whole as well, focusing on both its bright and dark sides.. Also, things like showcasing the contrasting opinions of the characters on every topic, positive as well as negative, while keeping each character's perspective in mind...that's much more realistic, works just fine to reflect how life's not always rainbows and unicorns as often portrayed in stories.. don't you think?
2024-09-10
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Moonlight
If this is called brutal then what the hell are other stories where Authors start the story with a crime mostly r*pe and then justify it, present it as something normal or romantic?
Don't be so harsh on yourself Author
2025-03-29
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❥𝐒𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐫𝐲~
Well if it is known as being fvcked up so it's good that you are..😌✨
Thank god something good took place.. I really needed that after previous chapter!
2024-11-30
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