Authy your way of writing this story is speechless. No words. That is "TALENT". Now I understand, there are people who take decisions and actions so slowly in real life too, wisely think about their decisions and actions, to be hoping their life will turn good and blissful, like ML. And on the other hand, people Who stay strong despite the negativities, struggles, no support, no luck...just hoping that, one day their life will turn good and blissful like FL. I absolutely love your story. I will support you and your story.
2025-04-14
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ARUHI
I don't think there is any problem with the author's story, it is your story and you are writing it very well. The words you are using, when and where are very important, which give influence on each character. Take comments as motivation but don't change story line according to comments bcz it is your story. You already have many thoughts on this , it's your work , you have right to portray what you want .
2025-04-14
2
RIYA
please shut this sanaya out...too irritating... everytime used to say like "u r just replaced " to siya...she went on her own will right...then y did she come back ? what happened to her bf? also bring progress between our main leads....I'm looking forward for their blooming love...
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Survivor~
Authy your way of writing this story is speechless. No words. That is "TALENT". Now I understand, there are people who take decisions and actions so slowly in real life too, wisely think about their decisions and actions, to be hoping their life will turn good and blissful, like ML. And on the other hand, people Who stay strong despite the negativities, struggles, no support, no luck...just hoping that, one day their life will turn good and blissful like FL. I absolutely love your story. I will support you and your story.
2025-04-14
2
ARUHI
I don't think there is any problem with the author's story, it is your story and you are writing it very well. The words you are using, when and where are very important, which give influence on each character. Take comments as motivation but don't change story line according to comments bcz it is your story. You already have many thoughts on this , it's your work , you have right to portray what you want .
2025-04-14
2
RIYA
please shut this sanaya out...too irritating... everytime used to say like "u r just replaced " to siya...she went on her own will right...then y did she come back ? what happened to her bf? also bring progress between our main leads....I'm looking forward for their blooming love...
2025-04-14
2