Hi, guys I really don't know how to write a love scene here. I wrote two chapters with it but it wasn't approved by Mangatoon so I had to delete it and revise the whole thing. Please give me suggestions because my next chapter will include such scenes but I really don't want it not to be accepted that would lead me to rewrite everything again on that chapter. I find it weird because reading other novels here, I see some sexy scenes were too racy and too vulgar. What I wrote was more subtle heheh. Please give me some advice. Thank you!
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SweetLoveBunny
Hi, guys I really don't know how to write a love scene here. I wrote two chapters with it but it wasn't approved by Mangatoon so I had to delete it and revise the whole thing. Please give me suggestions because my next chapter will include such scenes but I really don't want it not to be accepted that would lead me to rewrite everything again on that chapter. I find it weird because reading other novels here, I see some sexy scenes were too racy and too vulgar. What I wrote was more subtle heheh. Please give me some advice. Thank you!
2020-07-29
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