Share Rent, Share Love (S1)
Episode 5
Laia Burnell
That Rent came so soon at night?
Laia Burnell
😶😶Damn it must be the food delivery
Ring... Ring... Ring.... Ring
Laia Burnell
Coming *shouts*
She wents and brings the food in.
"What happens to the youngsters these days. Huff. Making people stood out late night" Said the delivery man
Laia Burnell
Alright, let's open up. I am too hungry 🤤
She unpacked it and started eating
Laia Burnell
It's too boring alone 😐
Laia Burnell
I have always wanted to be alone. But I never knew it would become so silent...
Laia went and sat beside the door
Laia Burnell
I never noticed that...
Laia Burnell
Eating alone will be so lonely. If mom and dad were here....
Laia Burnell
We could have talked happily and ate. 😕😕
Laia Burnell
I want to go back *slightly sobs*
While she was thinking....
She saw the screen and it was.....
Laia Burnell
*Wipes her tears and picks it up*
Laia Burnell
"I can't cry in front of mom"
Dawn Burnell
Sweety..... 📞
Laia Burnell
*Cracked voice*
Dawn Burnell
😧What happened Baby? Everything alright? 📞
Laia Burnell
Y.. yeah mom📞
Dawn Burnell
But why do you sound so down 😟?📞
Laia Burnell
No... Nothing mom. I... I just... just woke up. Haha. That's why....📞
Dawn Burnell
Why are you lying to me baby? 😢😢📞
Laia Burnell
Don't cry mom😧📞
Laia Burnell
I... I just miss you 😔📞
Dawn Burnell
.......I miss you too baby 📞
Laia Burnell
Can't I come back? 😭
Dawn Burnell
"My baby is alone and crying"😧😧
Drake Burnell
*Presses hand on her shoulder*
Drake Burnell
*Moves head as no*
Dawn Burnell
I... I can't take you back 📞
Laia Burnell
"Mom is doing this for some reason. I can't let her break like this 😞😞"
Laia Burnell
"I have to do it"
Laia Burnell
It's okay Mom📞
Laia Burnell
Just call me everyday 🙂📞
Dawn Burnell
Baby listen... 📞
Dawn Burnell
😢😢My Baby hungry up on me
Drake Burnell
*Consoles her* Don't worry. She will understand one day that why have we done this...
Drake Burnell
Shhh... Shhhhhh....
Dawn Burnell
*Sniff* *Sniff*
Laia Burnell
I want to quit the thought of living alone 😞😞
While crying she slept there
Author
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Comments
kate MTN (R)(P)
when reality is way too different from what we imagine that hurts a lot... the conveyance of feeling is the key to the good story. you achieved that in this chapter.
2021-04-22
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Peonies
story is great there... are some minute mistakes... reread these epi you will find in it....
other all is well .... I like the characters of laia more.... I see how she will become and independent girl....
-mtn community reader
2021-02-01
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💘 Neha 💘 (つ≧▽≦)つ Mtnp ❤️
Alright. Let me say my favourite part was when laia and Vlad where thinking about each other how they will... I internally shipped them.
And it's good that Laia realize that being alone is not always so amazing how we thinki it would be.
Well, I suppose you have written in hurry to complete it on time, but remember to reread afterwards so you can get rid of silly mistakes nothing much.
I love the story author
~Reader Neha from Mtn community
2021-01-08
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