this is what you call a embarassing moment. Poor Laia struled by the sudden revelation of her mind from someone else mouth. ~reader from MTN Community
2021-04-23
2
Someone MDC-P
she returned home (details not mentioned so it's presumed she came alone) but now can't walk for 3 days?that must have been because of she risking to walk alone there but.. sorry.. the writing was scarce there... try to add more details about the actions.. it gives depth of the characters.. GRAMMAR!! other than that Vlad and Laia's part was genuine... Good
2021-03-20
1
☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
Wahh...I can smell confession here..Eager to read more
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kate MTN (R)(P)
this is what you call a embarassing moment. Poor Laia struled by the sudden revelation of her mind from someone else mouth.
~reader from MTN Community
2021-04-23
2
Someone MDC-P
she returned home (details not mentioned so it's presumed she came alone) but now can't walk for 3 days?that must have been because of she risking to walk alone there but.. sorry.. the writing was scarce there... try to add more details about the actions.. it gives depth of the characters..
GRAMMAR!!
other than that Vlad and Laia's part was genuine... Good
2021-03-20
1
☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
Wahh...I can smell confession here..Eager to read more
~Reader From MTN Community
2021-03-18
1