• second thing is since you showed both noah and Jonah as mc....Jonah got highlighted more got more attention and also what Jonah did was wrong two timing with draven and Darius...but still in the story he never really got punished or hated for this but his twin who was innocent and didn't knew nothing got hurt by Darius and the fact that he hurt noah while he was pregnant....I think author you hated Noah's character or what?, i really expected a good revenge story since the story line was so strong but didn't really do justice
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Eligeti Preethi
and also till the very end jonah couldn't even find out who actually hurt his twin noah and I think this one point proves and shows how serious he was to get that so called "revenge" for his twin...and just blindly did whatever he thought was "revenge" but in reality he was two timing...till the very end he didn't even knew it was not either of the twins who raped Jonah...but it was riley....gosh now I'm feeling really bad for the author I think you were really careless while writing the story...
2025-08-26
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Eligeti Preethi
•the third is noah ending up with Martin i mean he was not even there in the story since the beginning and since you showed Darius and daren as ml i thought he would end up with one of them but you just gave him a side character who was also jonah's friend and that martin really badmouthed noah and hurt noah it makes no sense he still end up with Martin..and yet his twin Jonah end up with one of the twin who showed as main ml...
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Eligeti Preethi
• second thing is since you showed both noah and Jonah as mc....Jonah got highlighted more got more attention and also what Jonah did was wrong two timing with draven and Darius...but still in the story he never really got punished or hated for this but his twin who was innocent and didn't knew nothing got hurt by Darius and the fact that he hurt noah while he was pregnant....I think author you hated Noah's character or what?, i really expected a good revenge story since the story line was so strong but didn't really do justice
2025-08-26
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Eligeti Preethi
and also till the very end jonah couldn't even find out who actually hurt his twin noah and I think this one point proves and shows how serious he was to get that so called "revenge" for his twin...and just blindly did whatever he thought was "revenge" but in reality he was two timing...till the very end he didn't even knew it was not either of the twins who raped Jonah...but it was riley....gosh now I'm feeling really bad for the author I think you were really careless while writing the story...
2025-08-26
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Eligeti Preethi
•the third is noah ending up with Martin i mean he was not even there in the story since the beginning and since you showed Darius and daren as ml i thought he would end up with one of them but you just gave him a side character who was also jonah's friend and that martin really badmouthed noah and hurt noah it makes no sense he still end up with Martin..and yet his twin Jonah end up with one of the twin who showed as main ml...
2025-08-26
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