NO doubt story line is damn good and honestly the first thing which attracted me to this story is Fl was not someone weak n pathetic trying to gain attention and crying and playing victim or tolerating everything and later forgive them like some saint ....The Ml now him being clingy to his so called friend is jerk behaviour ..in order to take Elena out of her mind he is doing all this but is actually the one creating a more stronger barrier between them ...and also I loved How Fl was not trying to gain his attention or missing his so called care which he did like a switch button....when she does something he is all up lecturing and forcing her to admit that he is her husband but when it comes to her rights of standing beside like a wife he is all confused n behave like this is for the best .... no offence authy ur story is damn good its just that there are many similar plot line where Ml does all things wrong only to point at Fl when she does a thing wrong and accuse her of being uncultured,unprofessional ...its just that its always Fl who is called out for everything either be their marriage,either be it anything ...him siding with an outsider and outcasting Fl is more absurd ...
2025-03-22
1
no one🗿
well after marriage, it is a crime for girls to visit parents house 🙂
2025-03-31
1
siaana
authy I am totally loving the story I don't care what anyone says/Heart/
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NO doubt story line is damn good and honestly the first thing which attracted me to this story is Fl was not someone weak n pathetic trying to gain attention and crying and playing victim or tolerating everything and later forgive them like some saint ....The Ml now him being clingy to his so called friend is jerk behaviour ..in order to take Elena out of her mind he is doing all this but is actually the one creating a more stronger barrier between them ...and also I loved How Fl was not trying to gain his attention or missing his so called care which he did like a switch button....when she does something he is all up lecturing and forcing her to admit that he is her husband but when it comes to her rights of standing beside like a wife he is all confused n behave like this is for the best .... no offence authy ur story is damn good its just that there are many similar plot line where Ml does all things wrong only to point at Fl when she does a thing wrong and accuse her of being uncultured,unprofessional ...its just that its always Fl who is called out for everything either be their marriage,either be it anything ...him siding with an outsider and outcasting Fl is more absurd ...
2025-03-22
1
no one🗿
well after marriage,
it is a crime for girls to visit parents house 🙂
2025-03-31
1
siaana
authy I am totally loving the story I don't care what anyone says/Heart/
2025-03-22
2