author u should write their chatting more instead of writing too much of their pov like it almost makes it like a novel so write about talks more cuz it makes it quiet boring and takes too much time to read it's just and advice plz just see to it once and rest the story is good
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Suvigya Ojha
author u should write their chatting more instead of writing too much of their pov
like it almost makes it like a novel so write about talks more
cuz it makes it quiet boring and takes too much time to read
it's just and advice plz just see to it once and rest the story is good
2025-03-20
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