the story is good but don't mention the words like past life , reborn , betrayal etc repeatedly, it feels good until 3 chapters but over and over will give the story a boring look it over exaggerate sometimes excluding this the story and lines are good
2025-06-23
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Venizia
honesty I wanna gift more but the chapters are too short for me to appreciate fully ....maybe shortening the few paragraph at the top nd change them to the actual story will help more ? other then that the story is indeed good
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Chaya S
the story is good but don't mention the words like past life , reborn , betrayal etc repeatedly, it feels good until 3 chapters but over and over will give the story a boring look
it over exaggerate sometimes
excluding this the story and lines are good
2025-06-23
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Venizia
honesty I wanna gift more but the chapters are too short for me to appreciate fully ....maybe shortening the few paragraph at the top nd change them to the actual story will help more ? other then that the story is indeed good
2024-11-26
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Venizia
💅🏼💅🏼💅🏼
2024-11-26
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