why do I think this is fl real family and that family just adopted our fl🤔
2022-02-02
1
💢😄🩴Z24🩴😄💢
ummmm hey author, I love your works its really amazing 👏👏👏👏👏but I just wanted to say that
-when you write she or he, use the AUTHOR voice instead of the CHARACTERS voice
-when you use I or me, you can use the CHARACTERS voice
-also when you typed don't type all in one, cut into sections (such as 1-2 sentence) cuz there are probably some readers that are too lazy to read long stuff like me 😅😅
-but if you can't cut then don't use * cuz it's sorta confusing when she is saying or thinking but instead use ( ) or "
that all, just keep in mind that I'm just giving advices......don't take it to heart, hope this can help you and keep up the work😊😁
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bella❤️🔥
same thought 😅
2022-12-20
3
★𝒔𝒌𝒚𝑙𝑎𝑟★(not exist)
why do I think this is fl real family and that family just adopted our fl🤔
2022-02-02
1
💢😄🩴Z24🩴😄💢
ummmm hey author, I love your works its really amazing 👏👏👏👏👏but I just wanted to say that
-when you write she or he, use the AUTHOR voice instead of the CHARACTERS voice
-when you use I or me, you can use the CHARACTERS voice
-also when you typed don't type all in one, cut into sections (such as 1-2 sentence) cuz there are probably some readers that are too lazy to read long stuff like me 😅😅
-but if you can't cut then don't use * cuz it's sorta confusing when she is saying or thinking but instead use ( ) or "
that all, just keep in mind that I'm just giving advices......don't take it to heart, hope this can help you and keep up the work😊😁
2022-01-05
2