Aya, I really like the grammar and sentence structure to this. My only suggestion is to double check by reading this aloud to check for tiny errors and edit. But holey moley this is the best novel I’ve read so far. 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
2020-05-20
2
Margo Chambers
I love this story! So f*cking good, very well written, interesting story and characters. I can't wait for more! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 Where can I find other stories by this author? Thank you very much!
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Phylicia Robinson
Aya, I really like the grammar and sentence structure to this. My only suggestion is to double check by reading this aloud to check for tiny errors and edit. But holey moley this is the best novel I’ve read so far. 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
2020-05-20
2
Margo Chambers
I love this story! So f*cking good, very well written, interesting story and characters. I can't wait for more! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 Where can I find other stories by this author? Thank you very much!
2020-03-01
6