THE BEST WEDDING EVER 😌😌🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭😭😭😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
2021-03-08
2
XxLazyGirlxX
Happy Marriage Max and Linnie ( Best marriage in the world UwU )
2021-02-07
2
AsunaTwi04
There is literally about 50 lines that belong to the main story and about 55 that belong to the side story (including the interruption of the main story). Like I've said, I know it's your story and you can work it out whichever way you want, but when literally half of the gchapter is not about the main story, then it detracts from trying to gets to the end of the story and move forward at a good speed. Like I said, I really like your story, but these half stories and constant cliffhangers are getting old. I'm really trying to hang on though.
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THE BEST WEDDING EVER 😌😌🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭😭😭😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
2021-03-08
2
XxLazyGirlxX
Happy Marriage Max and Linnie ( Best marriage in the world UwU )
2021-02-07
2
AsunaTwi04
There is literally about 50 lines that belong to the main story and about 55 that belong to the side story (including the interruption of the main story). Like I've said, I know it's your story and you can work it out whichever way you want, but when literally half of the gchapter is not about the main story, then it detracts from trying to gets to the end of the story and move forward at a good speed. Like I said, I really like your story, but these half stories and constant cliffhangers are getting old. I'm really trying to hang on though.
2020-12-30
4