As I was reading my heart felt heavy! but now I finally let out a sigh of relief, and I let out a breathe I did not even know I was holding
2021-07-24
1
AsunaTwi04
Half the chapter is of nothing but this back and forth between these imaginary authors that really are bot advancing the story. Instead we could use the other half chapter of of good rich chapter details to tell us what is going to happen to our characters. The story is so good, but this constant stopping is detracting from the story. Even though I'm super mad 💢💢💢 at Aiden and Damon and don't wish for Josh to go back to them bc of the way that he treated him, I get the way the heart works when your missing a piece of it. But those assholes better repent, and better show him with their actions just how sorry they are, as well as pamper the Hell out of him to make up for the Hell they put him through. Also, it's "comfort" not "confront". Confront is used ex. You are going to "confront" someone about their cheating on you.
2020-12-30
6
bunny🐰 1408❤️
mah ship Josh and twin jasper and asher that will be good
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the mysterious women
As I was reading my heart felt heavy! but now I finally let out a sigh of relief, and I let out a breathe I did not even know I was holding
2021-07-24
1
AsunaTwi04
Half the chapter is of nothing but this back and forth between these imaginary authors that really are bot advancing the story. Instead we could use the other half chapter of of good rich chapter details to tell us what is going to happen to our characters. The story is so good, but this constant stopping is detracting from the story.
Even though I'm super mad 💢💢💢 at Aiden and Damon and don't wish for Josh to go back to them bc of the way that he treated him, I get the way the heart works when your missing a piece of it. But those assholes better repent, and better show him with their actions just how sorry they are, as well as pamper the Hell out of him to make up for the Hell they put him through.
Also, it's "comfort" not "confront". Confront is used ex. You are going to "confront" someone about their cheating on you.
2020-12-30
6
bunny🐰 1408❤️
mah ship Josh and twin
jasper and asher that will be good
2020-12-28
6