"The Threads of the Unknown"
Mission 1 :The Girl at the Station ( part 1 )
[ System Prompt Appears ]
[ Mission Start : Dimension 1 ]
[ Objective: Help the soul find what she's waiting for ]
[ Failure: Permanent loss of the soul ]
Kael Ardent
( Thinking ) A train station ? Why here ?
Aetherion
Location locked. Soul detected.
Kael Ardent
( looking around ) Empty. No trains, no passengers, Just -
( He notices a girl sitting alone on a bench. Pale, shivering. She stares at the tracks, clutching a small diary. )
Kael Ardent
( approaches cautiously ) Hey, are you alright ?
Unknown ???
( without looking up ) The train is late. It's always late.
Kael Ardent
( thinking ) Late ? There's no train coming. This must be the soul.
Kael Ardent
What are you waiting for ?
Soul ...
( finally looks at him, eyes hollow ) For someone. He promised he'd come back. I can't leave until he does.
( The system flickers in Kael's vision )
[ Clue Unlocked : Soul is bound by unfulfilled promise ]
Kael Ardent
( to himself ) So that's it. I need to help her move on. But how ?
Kael Ardent
( to girl ) Who promised you ?
Soul ...
( Hugs the diary tightly ) My brother. He said he'd take me away from this town.But the train never came. He never came.
Kael Ardent
( thinking ) Brother ? Missing train ?This feels, unfinished.
( Suddenly, the station lights flicker. The sound of a train horn echoes faintly, but no train appears. )
Aetherion
Warning. Dimensional instability detected. Soul's regret manifesting.
Kael Ardent
Regret is shaping this place. If I can't find out the truth, this whole station might collapse.
( He glances at the diary in her arms. )
Kael Ardent
( gently ) Can I, see that diary ? Maybe it'll help.
Soul ...
( hesitant, then slowly hands it over ) Be careful. It's all I have left.
( Kael opens the diary. The pages are filled with small drawings of trains, tickets, and a boy's handwriting : "I will come for you, Lil. Don't give up"
Kael Ardent
( thinking ) So the brother did care. But why didn't he return ?Did something happen to him ?
( A cold wind sweeps across the platform. Kael hears faint whispers - like voices from another time )
Male
( Whispered voice ) I am sorry, Lil. I couldn't make it.
Soul ...
( suddenly standing, panicked ) Did you hear that ?That was him ! That was my brother ! He's here, isn't he ?Tell me he's here !
System :
[ New Objective: Discover the truth about the brother's fate ]
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Ceridwen
This story is consuming my every thought. Update soon, Author!
2025-08-31
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