Make Me Better
Max: * Wakes up *
Mom ( Alice): Oh! Good morning sweetie!
Max: Morni'n mom...
Mom: Come down, breakfast us ready.
While eating
Mom: Sweetie, mommy will go home very early today.
Max: Huh? Is something gonna happen today?
Mom: Haha silly you... today is your birthday remember?
Max: Eh?? I forgot!
Mom: * Laughs * I have a big surprise for you when I get home.
Max: Thanks mom!
At school
Emily, Carl: Happy birthday Max! * Hands her a gift *
Max: Thanks very much guys!!
Emily: Ey no problem, how could you call us a friend if we forgot each others birthday.
Max: Yeah... Oh, I'll surely also give yoy a gift for your next birthday too!
Emily: Woah thanks Max!
Max: Wait, when is your birthday again?
Carl: Puff~
Emily: Max, I taught were friends! Uwu...
Max: * Laughs *
Carl: Max, is your wound already okay?
Max: Oh yes, thank you.
Carl: Dont worry about those bullies, I already reported them to the principle.
Max: Thank Carl, your the best.
Carl: * Blushes * N-no problem.
Emily ( pov ): Hmm... mah ship is sailing...
At home
Max: Im duper exited for my mom's surprise... * Goes to her room * I cant wait.
Later
Max: * Wakes up * Hm? * Checks clock * Its already 1 pm! * Goes outside her room * Mom? She's not yet home? * Looks around the room * Mom~ how long are gonna keep on hiding?!
* Police and ambulance sirens *
Max: * Goes out the apartment *
Crowd: Oh, is'nt she Detective Alice?
Max: * Gasp * Mom?
Women: It's Detective Alice's daughter...
Man: Poor her.
Max: * Sees her mom's body * Mo-mommy...
Police: * Talks to radio * The woman have wounds all over her body, she's bleeding too much please hurry up.
Max: Mom! * Cries *
Cop: Kid, your not allowed to pass the line.
Max: But she's my mom! Let me go to her! She really needs me!
Cop: Im sorry.
Max: Mom! * Sobs *
The next day ( At the hospital )
Emily, Carl: Max!
Carl: Max, are yoi alright?!
Max: * Crying *
Emily: Oh Max... * Cries *
Carl: * Sighs *
Police: Ms. Max?
Emily: She's my friend. * Points to Max *
Police: * Sighs * We found this in your mothers pocket, it looks like a present for someone, are there any occasions yesterday?
Carl: It was her bithday.
Police: Then I guess its your mother's gift to you Ms. Max. * Hands her the present * Happy birthday... * smiles *
Max: ...
Police: * Walks away *
Max: * Holds fist * That murderer deserves to die in fire!
The next day
Yohan ( Max's uncle ): Hello Max... Im here to take you. Im sorry for your mother's death...
Emily: Wait! Dont tell me she'll live in UK!
Yohan: Yes...
Carl: But Max might not be familiar there, she cant just-
Yohan: I cant lend Max to any stranger's house.
At the afternoon ( Outside the hospital )
Max, Yohan: * Walking away *
Carl: ... * Runs to Max then hugs her * I-Ill never forget you... I promise to find you in the future.
Max: * Emotionless *
Carl: * Loosens his hug *
Emily: * Cries *
Max( Narrator ): After my mother was murdered, I had a big troma for all my life.
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