Make Me Better

Make Me Better

Episode 1 Mom

Max: * Wakes up *

Mom ( Alice): Oh! Good morning sweetie!

Max: Morni'n mom...

Mom: Come down, breakfast us ready.

While eating

Mom: Sweetie, mommy will go home very early today.

Max: Huh? Is something gonna happen today?

Mom: Haha silly you... today is your birthday remember?

Max: Eh?? I forgot!

Mom: * Laughs * I have a big surprise for you when I get home.

Max: Thanks mom!

At school

Emily, Carl: Happy birthday Max! * Hands her a gift *

Max: Thanks very much guys!!

Emily: Ey no problem, how could you call us a friend if we forgot each others birthday.

Max: Yeah... Oh, I'll surely also give yoy a gift for your next birthday too!

Emily: Woah thanks Max!

Max: Wait, when is your birthday again?

Carl: Puff~

Emily: Max, I taught were friends! Uwu...

Max: * Laughs *

Carl: Max, is your wound already okay?

Max: Oh yes, thank you.

Carl: Dont worry about those bullies, I already reported them to the principle.

Max: Thank Carl, your the best.

Carl: * Blushes * N-no problem.

Emily ( pov ): Hmm... mah ship is sailing...

At home

Max: Im duper exited for my mom's surprise... * Goes to her room * I cant wait.

Later

Max: * Wakes up * Hm? * Checks clock * Its already 1 pm! * Goes outside her room * Mom? She's not yet home? * Looks around the room * Mom~ how long are gonna keep on hiding?!

* Police and ambulance sirens *

Max: * Goes out the apartment *

Crowd: Oh, is'nt she Detective Alice?

Max: * Gasp * Mom?

Women: It's Detective Alice's daughter...

Man: Poor her.

Max: * Sees her mom's body * Mo-mommy...

Police: * Talks to radio * The woman have wounds all over her body, she's bleeding too much please hurry up.

Max: Mom! * Cries *

Cop: Kid, your not allowed to pass the line.

Max: But she's my mom! Let me go to her! She really needs me!

Cop: Im sorry.

Max: Mom! * Sobs *

The next day ( At the hospital )

Emily, Carl: Max!

Carl: Max, are yoi alright?!

Max: * Crying *

Emily: Oh Max... * Cries *

Carl: * Sighs *

Police: Ms. Max?

Emily: She's my friend. * Points to Max *

Police: * Sighs * We found this in your mothers pocket, it looks like a present for someone, are there any occasions yesterday?

Carl: It was her bithday.

Police: Then I guess its your mother's gift to you Ms. Max. * Hands her the present * Happy birthday... * smiles *

Max: ...

Police: * Walks away *

Max: * Holds fist * That murderer deserves to die in fire!

The next day

Yohan ( Max's uncle ): Hello Max... Im here to take you. Im sorry for your mother's death...

Emily: Wait! Dont tell me she'll live in UK!

Yohan: Yes...

Carl: But Max might not be familiar there, she cant just-

Yohan: I cant lend Max to any stranger's house.

At the afternoon ( Outside the hospital )

Max, Yohan: * Walking away *

Carl: ... * Runs to Max then hugs her * I-Ill never forget you... I promise to find you in the future.

Max: * Emotionless *

Carl: * Loosens his hug *

Emily: * Cries *

Max( Narrator ): After my mother was murdered, I had a big troma for all my life.

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