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Make Me Better

Episode 1 Mom

Max: * Wakes up *

Mom ( Alice): Oh! Good morning sweetie!

Max: Morni'n mom...

Mom: Come down, breakfast us ready.

While eating

Mom: Sweetie, mommy will go home very early today.

Max: Huh? Is something gonna happen today?

Mom: Haha silly you... today is your birthday remember?

Max: Eh?? I forgot!

Mom: * Laughs * I have a big surprise for you when I get home.

Max: Thanks mom!

At school

Emily, Carl: Happy birthday Max! * Hands her a gift *

Max: Thanks very much guys!!

Emily: Ey no problem, how could you call us a friend if we forgot each others birthday.

Max: Yeah... Oh, I'll surely also give yoy a gift for your next birthday too!

Emily: Woah thanks Max!

Max: Wait, when is your birthday again?

Carl: Puff~

Emily: Max, I taught were friends! Uwu...

Max: * Laughs *

Carl: Max, is your wound already okay?

Max: Oh yes, thank you.

Carl: Dont worry about those bullies, I already reported them to the principle.

Max: Thank Carl, your the best.

Carl: * Blushes * N-no problem.

Emily ( pov ): Hmm... mah ship is sailing...

At home

Max: Im duper exited for my mom's surprise... * Goes to her room * I cant wait.

Later

Max: * Wakes up * Hm? * Checks clock * Its already 1 pm! * Goes outside her room * Mom? She's not yet home? * Looks around the room * Mom~ how long are gonna keep on hiding?!

* Police and ambulance sirens *

Max: * Goes out the apartment *

Crowd: Oh, is'nt she Detective Alice?

Max: * Gasp * Mom?

Women: It's Detective Alice's daughter...

Man: Poor her.

Max: * Sees her mom's body * Mo-mommy...

Police: * Talks to radio * The woman have wounds all over her body, she's bleeding too much please hurry up.

Max: Mom! * Cries *

Cop: Kid, your not allowed to pass the line.

Max: But she's my mom! Let me go to her! She really needs me!

Cop: Im sorry.

Max: Mom! * Sobs *

The next day ( At the hospital )

Emily, Carl: Max!

Carl: Max, are yoi alright?!

Max: * Crying *

Emily: Oh Max... * Cries *

Carl: * Sighs *

Police: Ms. Max?

Emily: She's my friend. * Points to Max *

Police: * Sighs * We found this in your mothers pocket, it looks like a present for someone, are there any occasions yesterday?

Carl: It was her bithday.

Police: Then I guess its your mother's gift to you Ms. Max. * Hands her the present * Happy birthday... * smiles *

Max: ...

Police: * Walks away *

Max: * Holds fist * That murderer deserves to die in fire!

The next day

Yohan ( Max's uncle ): Hello Max... Im here to take you. Im sorry for your mother's death...

Emily: Wait! Dont tell me she'll live in UK!

Yohan: Yes...

Carl: But Max might not be familiar there, she cant just-

Yohan: I cant lend Max to any stranger's house.

At the afternoon ( Outside the hospital )

Max, Yohan: * Walking away *

Carl: ... * Runs to Max then hugs her * I-Ill never forget you... I promise to find you in the future.

Max: * Emotionless *

Carl: * Loosens his hug *

Emily: * Cries *

Max( Narrator ): After my mother was murdered, I had a big troma for all my life.

Episode 2 New School

8 years later

( Max - 14 years old )

* Loud knock on door *

Max: * Wakes up *

Aunt: Max wake up!

Max: * Opens door *

Aunt: You want to make Cassie late for school dont you?!

Max: ...

Aunt: Really, me scolding a bitch early in the morning? Its wasting my time.

Max: Then next time you dont need to wake me up if it will waste your time.

Aunt: So it means you really want Cassie late?

Max: Then you guys dont have to wait for me.

Aunt: * Pushes Max * You bitch!

Max: * Stands up, then walks away *

While eating

Uncle: Good morning Max!

Max: * Seats on her chair *

Cassie: Hmp...

Uncle: So girls, today will be the start of your new school.

Cassie: Yeah?

Uncle: I want you guys to behave, not like you guys did on your previous school.

Cassie: ...

Uncle: Especially you Cassie, why dont you be like Max? Look, she's well behaved.

Cassie: * Bangs the table * Dad! Are you seriously in this bitch's side?!

Uncle: Watch your manners Cassie! Apologize to her in a proper way and call her by her real name!

Cassie: * Gasp * Really?! * Runs to her room *

Max: * Goes to the bathroom *

Aunty: To be honest honey... Max is just a bad luck to us, dont forget your brother died because of her mother.

Uncle: This have nothing to do with Max.

Aunty: Since that girl appeared here, everything started to worsen dear. I dont know what good side do you see on her. * Walks away *

Uncle: * Sighs *

At school

Cassie, Max: * Walking *

Others: Are they the new students? They look obviously rich, they even had a car.

Cassie: * Smirks *

Ben: Hello there beatiful lady~

Cassie: Oh thank y-

Ben: I see, you dont talk to much huh?

Cassie: * Looks at Ben *

Max: * Staring at Ben *

Ben: My name is Ben. * Offers Max a hand *

Max: * Shakes his hand * Max.

Ben: Nice to meet you.

Max: * Walks away *

Cassie ( pov ): That bitch, why did she have the attention first?!

At their classroom

Max: * Writing on her notebook *

Lana: He-hello there...

Max: * Looks at Lana * Yes Ms. Lana?

Lana: You remembered my name?

Max: I remembered everyone's.

Lana: U-uhm... the principle told me to be your guide around here. * Fixes her eyeglass * Im sorry you have to partner up with a nerd like me.

Max: I have no problem for you being a nerd.

Lana: O-oh tha-thank you. Shall I start tou-touring you around now?

Max: * Nods *

Few moments later

( At the gym )

Lana: And lastly this is the gym. You must becareful around here. Balls are flying everywhere.

Max: ...

( Ball flying to Lana )

Lana: I hope you loved this school-

Max: * Goes closer to Lana and catches the ball *

Lana: * Gasp *

Max: You alright?

Lana: Ye-yes.

Max: * Looks around *

Lana: * Blushes * Ma-Max, dont you think were to clo-close?

Max: Im sorry. * Makes distance to her * Do balls hit you everyday?

Lana: Well... yes?

Max: The balls were not flying around, they're flying to you.

Lana: What do you mean?!

Max: Someone purposely throwed it to you.

Lana: What?

Max: Were at the middle side of the court and the rings are far from us. Thus when I looked around after the ball was throwned to you there was no one infront of us. * Goes near Lana * So its impossible someone will pass it here... * Fixes Lana's hair * ... when there's no one to catch the fire.

Lana: * Blushes *

Episode 3

Free time

Max: * sleeping on her desk *

??? ( boy ): Hey, schools already over.

Max: ...

??? ( boy ): * Taps Max's shoulder *

Max: You go ahead. I dont have the mood to go homr.

??? ( boy ): * Seats down beside her * Then I'll wait till you gain your mood.

Max: * Sleeps *

Later

Max: * Wakes up *

??? ( boy ): You good now? I bet three hours sleep is enough...

Max: * Gets her bag and walks away *

??? ( boy ): * Follows her *

Max: ...

??? ( boy ): My name is Jack.

Max: Max.

Jack: ...

Walking home

Max: ....

Jack: ....

Max: Is this your way home?

Jack: Yeah.

Max: Im here... thanks for accompanying mr Mr.Jack.

Jack: Hey dont misunderstand it, its just that we have the same way. * ( pov ) I guess she's embarassed while thinking that I accompany her. Hahaha, Burn! *

Max: No, I meant thanks for waiting for me at school.

Jack: Oh... ok.

Max: * Shuts her door *

Jack: She's not friendly huh...

Aunt: How come your so late?!

Max: ...

Aunt: Cassie is crying in her room because of you. Why did you told those girls to bully her?! Max what kind of cousin are you?!

Max: I know nothing about those.

Cassie: * Slaps Max * Liar!

Max: ...

Cassie: Stop lying you bitch!

Max: * Runs to her room *

At Max's room

Max: Im not lying! Im not lying! Im not lying! * Brakes her comb on the table *

( Hallucinations )

Cassie: Max your a terrible person!

Aunt: You deserve that!

???: Your father died because of you and your mother

Max: Dont you dare talk about my mother! * Throws a vase *

The next day

Max: * Reading a book *

Ellie: Look at my new necklace...

Flora: Looks beatifull!

Ellie: I'll wear this just whenever senpai is around.

Other girls: * Surrounds Ellie * Where did you bought that.

Alicia: ...

Max: ...

At the library

Lana: Hi Ma-Max.

Max: ...

Lana: You said you love reading books right? Especially novels... Here I brought some for you.

Max: Thanks.

Lana: Welcome...

Max: I'll go to the restroom first.

Lana: Okay.

Richard: Come on, why are you so afraid? Dont you know Im a gentleman?

Anna: No!

Ben: You cant refuse us Anna.

Anna: Please, let go of me!

Richard: * Laughs *

Max: Let go of her.

Ben: Who are you?

Richard: Another beatifull girl?

Ben: Haha, its your fault we'll do this to you. * Grabs Max *

Max: * Punches Ben *

Ben: Woah!

Richard: You bitch...

Max: * Gasp * .... I- I am not a... Bitch! * Hits Richard with a stick *

Richard: Ugh!

Max: Im not bitch! * Hits Richard again *

Yuki: * Stops Max * Its enough Max...

Anna: Sir Yuki!

Max: ...

Yuki: Everything is alright. Please get them.

Other male students: * Grabe Ben and Richard *

Yuki: Anna, bring yourself to the infirmary, I'll talk to Max.

Anna: Ye-yes...

Max: ...

Yuki: Im greatfull you saved but please dont do any voilence.

Max: They called me bitch.

Yuki: Everyone is called bitch.

Max: Im not a bitch! * Holds her fist *

Yuki: Are you not used to that word?

Max: Dont call me a bitch!

Yuki: Relax!

Hallucinations

Aunt: Who said your not a bitch?!

Max: Stop calling me bitch.

Cassie: Hahaha, you deserve it.

Max: * Covers ears *

Yuki: Max are you okay?

Max: * Screams *

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