order from tinatin

ORDER FROM TINATIN TO AVTANDIL
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This one year passed without avtandil sharing his love with anyone..he kept it secret..
he was trying .. trying his best to hide his feelings..
He wouldn't dare to express his feelings to her.. after all she was his queen..and he was just mare slave of hers
would anyone allow their marriage? Of a queen and her servant?
So he was suffering..he thought seeing her everyday would grant him happiness but it made it worse.. whenever he sew her, his pain grow wider!
When he couldn't see her, he would burn in fire!
There was no cure..he was suffering both ways thing young, when he still didn't have his beard grown properly!
one would not know he was in love..he was hiding it perfectly.. masking it with his smile and confidence, when in reality he was crying every night..
One night..
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he was alone in his chamber.. playing on the music instrument placed in front of him
Just then.. servant came in..
servants
servants
Her majesty is asking for your presence *bows his head in respect*
AVTANDILI
AVTANDILI
*in mind* Tinatin?!
AVTANDILI
AVTANDILI
I'll be there! *rose from his seat*
He was nervous, happy, excited, prideful-
Even at night..he choose his best clothes with its best jewels.. totally dolling up himself..
He left to meet her confidently, it was first time they were going to meet alone..and he was walking with no shame!
It was pleasant to be near his beloved..
He boldly stepped inside her room, only to be blinded by her light!
she sat composed, confident, moonlight shining behind her as she eclipsed the moon itself!
She was wearing jewels and veil..her looks being unreal, not earthly but heavenly!
her jet coloured hair was falling over her shoulders and her naked neck, eyes with long black lashes showing something mysterious..she didn't seem happy rather disturbed!
servants
servants
*places seat for avtandil in front of her and leaves*
Tinatin quitly greeted avtandil and seated him in front of her
AVTANDILI
AVTANDILI
*gazes at her, full of joy, curious on what she was going to say to him*
TINATIN
TINATIN
I don't have any more strength to hide this or the reason of my disturbance..
She started talking first..that how it was.. confident..she knew what she wanted and she was sure to get it.
AVTANDILI
AVTANDILI
*frowns* then say what you are sad, and what can relive you?
she replied to him gracefully, her words not ill-chosen
TINATIN
TINATIN
I'll say..but first I have something else to say..
AVTANDILI
AVTANDILI
*listening to her quietly, not daring to disturb her with his presence*
TINATIN
TINATIN
Remember when you and my father went hunting?
TINATIN
TINATIN
I'm still disturbed because of that unknown man..
TINATIN
TINATIN
He Made my father sad and beated our knights..he possesd danger and he disappeared like he never existed!
TINATIN
TINATIN
The knights we sent to search for him came back with no trace of him..but I'm still disturbed..
TINATIN
TINATIN
if you search for him.. I'll calm down..
TINATIN
TINATIN
but that not all..I'm not going to continue hiding.. it has tired me already!
TINATIN
TINATIN
I know your feelings for me..you can't hide it..
TINATIN
TINATIN
Our feelings are mutual..I answer your feelings with feeling, this years I have hidden it as well..
She was one to make first move..shocking avtandil with each of her word
TINATIN
TINATIN
the job I'm ordering you..*look in his eyes* you have to do it firstly as a knight..and secondly as my beloved..
TINATIN
TINATIN
I'll give you three years..go to all places of earth as search for him..if you come back with no trace of him, I'll believe he was a vision!
TINATIN
TINATIN
This is work of heroes you will be doing..do it and court me! it's man's job to burn in love and do the courting..
TINATIN
TINATIN
I promise to not marry Anyone except you! if I break my promise may my soul never see glimpse of paradise, may hell gulp me down!
everything was happening fastly..he was shocked..happy.. confused, how did she know he had feelings for her, was it obvious?
That night they promised eachother love, they spent time talking about all kinds of things, laughing as their love bloomed like a flower in spring!
He was ready to do everything for her ,like she was some heavenly planet
As the time came for their parting away, he found it hard..he couldn't do it
AVTANDILI
AVTANDILI
*walking back to his chamber as he keeps looking back at the door of hers*
He kept looking back..his eyes were now teary..three years was a lot of time..
He changed his clothes and layed on his bed..
AVTANDILI
AVTANDILI
*tears starts to come down one by one as he stares up*
He spent night crying..it was usual for him, but this time he knew his love was not one sided..
after a lot of time..he finally slept.. but Tinatin was not leaving his mind even in sleep..
He constantly had dreams about her.. meeting her and then partying away..
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Next morning he rose from bed early and wore his modest clothes
He ordered his servant to pass a message to king rostevan..
AVTANDILI
AVTANDILI
" my greetings to lord! I have decided to leave and spread news of tinatins success to throne, I'm going to make obedient rejoice and theme disobedient! Give your blessings to me as im going already!"
rostevan rejoiced as he heard plans of avtandil..but ofcourse, avtandil was lying to him.. instead he was going to search knight in panter's skin in secret..
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king rostevan
king rostevan
*hugs avtandil tenderly as his tear falls*
king rostevan
king rostevan
Be careful my son..evil never sleeps!
AVTANDILI
AVTANDILI
I will be my lord.. don't be worried on me please..*smiles reassuringly*
It was still hard for rostevan..he was loving man..he didn't want to part away from anyone!
But it was needed.. avtandil mounted his horse and rided away..he sew tinatin's face instead of roads!
Tears falling on his ruby cheeks as he walks for twenty days.. finally reaching his own city..
To be continued!
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walks? he has horse right? 🤧

2025-04-17

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moreeee updates bish!!!!! where is my Tariel?!!! 😭😭😭

2025-04-17

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it should be allowed if they love each other 😔😔

2025-04-17

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