REVENGE: THE ULTIMATE PLANNING
Draft
[Scene opens — dim living room, rain tapping on the windows softly]
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
(quietly, holding an old photo frame)
"You always smiled like nothing was wrong… even when everything was."
[Flashback fades in — Caelan smiling at the camera, bruises faintly hidden beneath his collar.]
Diary Entry (Caelan’s handwriting):
“Some bruises don’t heal.
Some lies grow roots.
But I smile… because even the broken must survive.”
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
(clutching the book):
"What the hell happened to you?"
[Cut to Aeryn pacing in the kitchen, notebook on the table, a web of names and connections drawn out.]
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
Aeryn (thinking):
Caelan never once spoke of his husband’s cruelty.
But his silence says enough.
And Lucien...
Lucien was there.
[Scene shift — Aeryn calls someone. Ringing. Someone picks up.]
any male
Unknown Voice (deep, calm):
“Detective Aeryn. I was wondering when you’d start digging.”
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
You were at the party the night Caelan died, weren’t you?"
any male
And yet… I wasn’t invited to the funeral. Curious."
[Call ends abruptly. Aeryn slams the phone down.]
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
(growling):
"Who the hell were you protecting, hyung?"
[Final scene — Aeryn staring out the window, holding the diary close. The storm outside grows louder.]
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
(voiceover):
I came back for a funeral.
But I stayed for the truth.
And I won't stop until I find it.
Even if it kills me.
Comments
Cute girl
it's really getting interesting, it needs intelligence to create such scenes, making it look mysterious.... I'm impressed authy 😳
2025-04-08
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