IBADAT : His Devotion to Love
Ep 3
There was pin drop silence in the dining room , only the cutlery sounds were heard , the royal maids were serving silently and after serving they went out of there , the royal Chauhan's were having their dinner , the Raja sa , sitting on the head chair , beside him was sitting Rani sa , followed by Saranya and Nishkarsh , in front of them were sitting Vikas , Brinda and Mritsa , having their dinner but Mritsa was busy in glaring at Saranya , making her uncomfortable
Mritsa Chauhan/FL cousin
Saranya ❄️
Saranya Chauhan/FL
ji..jii
Mritsa Chauhan/FL cousin
I heard you went to the Rambagh Palace today❄️
Saranya Chauhan/FL
(nod her head)
Mritsa Chauhan/FL cousin
I also heard that two famous names were present there today❄️
Saranya Chauhan/FL
I..I don't know (low voice)
Mritsa Chauhan/FL cousin
you should learn to behave , you're already 25 ❄️
Nishkarsh Chauhan/FL cousin
Says the one who should behave (mumbled)
Mritsa Chauhan/FL cousin
NISHKARSH ❄️
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
Voice down ❄️
Mritsa Chauhan/FL cousin
I apologize dado sa (said while gritting her teeths)
Nishkarsh Chauhan/FL cousin
(silently having his dinner)
Vikas Chauhan/FL uncle
Baba sa ❄️
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
(looks at him)
Vikas Chauhan/FL uncle
I got a marriage proposal for Saranya❄️
Saranya Chauhan/FL
(hands stopped in middle while eating)
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
(put the cutlery down while looking at Vikas)
Vikas Chauhan/FL uncle
I even met him today , he is a good match for Saranya ❄️
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
don't you think you should think about Mritsa before talking about choti kuwarani❄️
Vikas Chauhan/FL uncle
She already loves someone ❄️
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
Is it true ? ❄️
Mritsa Chauhan/FL cousin
jii dado sa
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
Who is it ? ❄️
Mritsa Chauhan/FL cousin
He is a businessman , I met him today too , when I came to meet baba sa in Rambagh Palace
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
You just met him today❄️
Mritsa Chauhan/FL cousin
no , I have seen him many times before too
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
Do he loves you ❄️
Mritsa Chauhan/FL cousin
No , but I talked with baba sa to talk about my marriage with him , I want him
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
You can't force someone ❄️
Mritsa Chauhan/FL cousin
I-
Brinda Chauhan/FL aunt
(held her hand)
Mritsa Chauhan/FL cousin
(sat silently)
Vikas Chauhan/FL uncle
baba sa , I think we should think about the proposal for Saranya , he is good ❄️
Saranya Chauhan/FL
I..I apologise , b..but I am done (said while getting up)
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
(looking at Vikas with blank face)
Saranya Chauhan/FL
(went from there)
Nishkarsh Chauhan/FL cousin
I am also done ❄️ (got up and went from there)
Brinda Chauhan/FL aunt
Just what have that girl done to my son that he don't even glance at his own sister and run behind her (mumbled)
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
first and last warning , there should be no discussion of choti kuwarani's marriage until she wants ❄️ (warning tone)
Vikas Chauhan/FL uncle
..........
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
AM I CLEAR ❄️
Vikas Chauhan/FL uncle
J..jii baba sa
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
(left from there)
Saranya Chauhan/FL
(gets in the bed and pull the blanket over herself)
Saranya Chauhan/FL
I miss you maa baba (lone tear escaped)
Saranya's parents died at a young age , she was brought up by her paternal grandparents , her maternal grandparents also loved her a lot but they too died when Saranya was 19 years old , her only family is her dadi sa and dado sa , it's also true that her kaki sa and kako sa hates her and she suffered a lot in their presence , as a child , her kaki sa was too harsh on her , she is just like a living corpse , living aimlessly , she once tried suicide too because she was tired of living in this hell , but she was brought to the hospital in time as one of her personal royal maid noticed it
In FL's grandparents room
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
(puffing cigar)
Miraya Chauhan/FL grandmother
I will take Saranya with me tomorrow , I don't trust that woman ❄️
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
You should have thought about this 7 years back ❄️
Miraya Chauhan/FL grandmother
I regret leaving her alone in this house
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
(thinking something while puffing cigar)
Miraya Chauhan/FL grandmother
What are you thinking?
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
isn't god too cruel to that innocent soul
Miraya Chauhan/FL grandmother
..........
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
First god snatched her parents from her , then her maternal grandparents , and we are also aged now , God knows what will happen to choti kuwarani when we will not be here for her (closed his eyes)
Miraya Chauhan/FL grandmother
If God closes one door then he opens another , just like that , there must be someone for choti kuwarani , who will love her like Siya Ram , who will worship the ground she walks on , who will pour himself into her
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
These are just fantasies
Miraya Chauhan/FL grandmother
I believe in my god , he will surely send someone for choti kuwarani
Siddharth Chauhan/FL grandfather
(thinking about what happened in the Rambagh Palace today)
NOTE : don't trust the characters , who knows who is the villain~
Yakshit Arya/ML
bloody asshole ❄️ (threw his phone)
Akhil Kumar/ML P.A
(´-﹏-`)
Yakshit Arya/ML
Stop all the contacts with Vikas Chauhan , we should be related to Siddharth Chauhan only ❄️
Akhil Kumar/ML P.A
(nod his head)
Yakshit Arya/ML
And about that marriage proposal , fu*king block everything about me and... ❄️
Akhil Kumar/ML P.A
I got it
Yakshit Arya/ML
get me the D.E.T.A.I.L.S of that Mritsa Chauhan❄️
Akhil Kumar/ML P.A
(nod his head)
Yakshit Arya/ML
(looking at him)
Akhil Kumar/ML P.A
10 minutes and I will send you a brand-new phone with a new number
Yakshit Arya/ML
You can leave now ❄️
Akhil Kumar/ML P.A
(nod his head and turn to leave)
Yakshit Arya/ML
(raised his eyebrows)
Akhil Kumar/ML P.A
Already done ⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾
Anyone
(standing in the balcony while looking at the moon)
Anyone
ऐ चाँद , मत पूछ मुझसे मेरे जागने की वजह ,
जो मुझे सोने नहीं देता उसके सामने तू भी उसका टुकड़ा लगेगा
(TRANSLATION : dear Moon, don't ask me the reason for my waking up, In front of the one who doesn't let me sleep, you too will feel like a piece of her)
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Author
Is my story "When I saw HER" terrible ?
Author
Just what in the world makes that story "terrible" ?
Comments
Samyuktha
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I don't know who said that but don't let the few negative opinions deter you from writing.. we readers really love your stories so Please don't let one comment make you doubt your story!!
2025-03-04
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Dia elegant ❤️
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2025-03-04
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LIGHT- IN- THE SKY ✨🌸
they are more terrible author /NosePick/they are must be some stupid who are calling your story terrible, don't worry they cay just commented but can't do anything,
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2025-03-04
5