author 🥰 ur story is too good....but in this episode i observed some thing in ml conversation with ml..u wrote some sentences in passive voice and some on active voice....while saying about that girl frm past five years to fl....i donno u understood what iam trying to convey...other than that... everything is too good 🌻🥰
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AMMIREDDY SUGUNA
author 🥰 ur story is too good....but in this episode i observed some thing in ml conversation with ml..u wrote some sentences in passive voice and some on active voice....while saying about that girl frm past five years to fl....i donno u understood what iam trying to convey...other than that... everything is too good 🌻🥰
2025-02-15
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Somu
sorry author,i was busy with some work./Smile/
2025-02-03
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~~ alien❤️🌚~~
finallyyyyy
2025-02-04
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