nahh athuyy it's totally fine. ... one thing which I agree with you is these characters r yours they r the beautiful creation of yours and u know the best about the story and your characters and am pretty sure u have done the best with the knowledge of what's the best for the story..... furthermore I would like say that as readers we just get carried by the character s or the plot and might say something hurt full for which I would like apologise in behalf of EVERY READER...... Anyways your story is one of the best that I have ever read...!!!!
2025-02-15
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Jee Hun Sugoi
sorry author if my words hurt your feelings 🙏😔 but I just wanted to tell my feelings and opinions towards story and characters bojo is good but you know their are thousands of story like red x green flag and i really like Mateo He is so handsome and look powerful jovanni and he looks so good together 😍 i really wanted to see how jovanni make Mateo a good person and spoil him also 😜🌚 but if you don't want to continue they're story it's okay 😭 👍 ( 😭😭😭 ) it's your choice
2025-02-02
2
Moon glow
I don't think it matter's, but here is my 2 cents: you can't help who you fall in love with. And maybe Bowie doesn’t see Vanni as a relative, and that is why he let his feelings grow to the point of obsession. Personally I don't like relatives getting together, but I m not going to go balistic if Bowie and Vanny end up together. Maybe we will find out that Vanny is adopted or something and then all is peachy again😁
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Yasmin 🧿🖤
nahh athuyy it's totally fine. ... one thing which I agree with you is these characters r yours they r the beautiful creation of yours and u know the best about the story and your characters and am pretty sure u have done the best with the knowledge of what's the best for the story..... furthermore I would like say that as readers we just get carried by the character s or the plot and might say something hurt full for which I would like apologise in behalf of EVERY READER...... Anyways your story is one of the best that I have ever read...!!!!
2025-02-15
2
Jee Hun Sugoi
sorry author if my words hurt your feelings 🙏😔 but I just wanted to tell my feelings and opinions towards story and characters bojo is good but you know their are thousands of story like red x green flag and i really like Mateo He is so handsome and look powerful jovanni and he looks so good together 😍 i really wanted to see how jovanni make Mateo a good person and spoil him also 😜🌚 but if you don't want to continue they're story it's okay 😭 👍 ( 😭😭😭 ) it's your choice
2025-02-02
2
Moon glow
I don't think it matter's, but here is my 2 cents: you can't help who you fall in love with. And maybe Bowie doesn’t see Vanni as a relative, and that is why he let his feelings grow to the point of obsession. Personally I don't like relatives getting together, but I m not going to go balistic if Bowie and Vanny end up together. Maybe we will find out that Vanny is adopted or something and then all is peachy again😁
2025-03-14
0