ok great story... great plot ..but I feel that it has too many loopholes. first, If a person has undergone such a traumatic past it's not that easy to recover and her fast pase recovery and no relapse doesn't make sense. And I feel her family is emotionally forcing themselves on her it's not possible to accept someone so easily when you have no basic understanding about relationship.Her mental health and the amount of family grief that should have been discussed is not enough. Secondly, she needs a therapist for her speech and mental health. It's fine with family help but that's not enough and that's basic which I feel should have been included in plot. Thirdly the abuse she had undergone can definitely led to permanent damage to her body which is not discussed and no professional medical help is discussed about either. and next if they were so powerful how it is possible that they were not able to find Nia for so many years like common it's too much. and lastly why leave such an open end for her past abusive family. They were able to occupy power but what is the use of it when you can't even use it for your family like the basic...and even if you can't use the underhand means still legal measures are available because child abuse trafficking and slave are crime...so I feel it's a bit logicless.... It's fine if you want it as a good read romance but just shut your brains...too many loopholes p.s. - take it as constructive criticism not a hate comment.Thanks
2025-01-12
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Destiny ❤️
no you are getting it wrong it means that she wanted to do twining with her daughter ( like wearing same clothes)
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Janet Breeze
ok great story... great plot ..but I feel that it has too many loopholes.
first, If a person has undergone such a traumatic past it's not that easy to recover and her fast pase recovery and no relapse doesn't make sense. And I feel her family is emotionally forcing themselves on her it's not possible to accept someone so easily when you have no basic understanding about relationship.Her mental health and the amount of family grief that should have been discussed is not enough.
Secondly, she needs a therapist for her speech and mental health. It's fine with family help but that's not enough and that's basic which I feel should have been included in plot.
Thirdly the abuse she had undergone can definitely led to permanent damage to her body which is not discussed and no professional medical help is discussed about either.
and next if they were so powerful how it is possible that they were not able to find Nia for so many years like common it's too much.
and lastly why leave such an open end for her past abusive family. They were able to occupy power but what is the use of it when you can't even use it for your family like the basic...and even if you can't use the underhand means still legal measures are available because child abuse trafficking and slave are crime...so I feel it's a bit logicless....
It's fine if you want it as a good read romance but just shut your brains...too many loopholes
p.s. - take it as constructive criticism not a hate comment.Thanks
2025-01-12
2
Destiny ❤️
no you are getting it wrong it means that she wanted to do twining with her daughter ( like wearing same clothes)
2024-10-17
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Tijung😜😏😜
Wait what if she really did have twins?
2024-10-17
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