Written Destiny : A Saga of Crimson Love
episode 17
Aastha patel (FL)
*aastha was busy looking at the jhumkas in front of her, she was looking through the pairs of jhumka unaware of atharva standing just behind her*
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva was already in a daze, he leans closer to her from him, his face across her hair inhaling the sweet smell, he raises his hand and holds out another pair of jhumka in front of her*
Aastha patel (FL)
*aastha was caught off guard, she stiffened in her place but when his cologne hit her, she realized it was atharva just behind her standing so close, she lowered her gaze and looked at the pair that atharva took out for her*
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva leaned near her ear and said to her in a low voice*..these will go well with the saree maa gave you
Aastha patel (FL)
*aastha heart beat raised as she heard his husky voice so close to her, she took the pair from him* ..ji rana sa ...
*she moved a little away from him, telling the shopkeeper to pack all the items she bought*
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva smirked looking at her, with his hand on his pants pocket, he knew ..no matter what he had an effect on her and that's the reason she always walks away from him*
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva looked around in the shop with all the beautiful jhumkas and jewelry and nods his head thinking something*
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*his gaze was then fixated on her with his usual half smile and his eyes glowing with amusement*
Aastha patel (FL)
*aastha took all the items from the shopkeeper , a few jhumkas and 2 pairs of red bangles, she turned around and took a glance back at atharva and then averted her gaze immediately and started walking ahead of him ignoring him*
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva started walking behind her and he narrowed his eyes looking at her back, her long black hair flowing with the wind* .../hmm ..something's missing/
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva looked around spotting a young boy selling gajra and he walked towards the boy and bought jasmine gajra from him*
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva looks at the boy handing him two thousand rupees cash*
gajra seller boy
Maharaj ..bas 80 rupay ka hai , baki chutta nahi hai
(maharaj ..it's just 80 rupees,I don't have change)
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva looked at the boy and asked him in a soft voice* ..do you go to school ?
gajra seller boy
*the boy was confused but answers to him timidly* ..yes maharaj ...I go to school daily !
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva pats the boy in the head* ...then it's the money for your hard work and the childhood you have to sacrifice most of the time
gajra seller boy
*the boy was left stunned holding the 2000 rupees note in his hand, atharva's words were too complicated for him but there was something he understood....the money atharva gave wasn't out of sympathy like others do, the money he earned today was something out of his hard work and sacrifice that atharva noticed*
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva held the gajra in his hand and walked up to aastha catching up with his long strides , near the pond of the temple*
Aastha patel (FL)
*aastha was walking ahead looking at the beautiful pond and it's sunset*
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva held aastha by her arm and suddenly turned her pulling her towards himself making her collide with himself*
Aastha patel (FL)
*she gasped when he pulled her and aastha looked up at him confused* ..rana sa. What are you doing ?
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva just stared at her with a smirk but his eyes softened looking at her with the golden glow of the sunset* ..nothing my rana sa , I just thought something was missing in your outfit
Aastha patel (FL)
*aastha narrowed her eyes in confusion, she starts looking at her dress and jewelries thinking she might have dropped something* ..what is missing ?
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva leaves her arm and tilts her head up with his finger making her look at him* ..kaali raat me sitaro ki chamak ...you are missing that !
(shining stars in the dark night )
Aastha patel (FL)
hein 🙂 ..*aastha looks at him confused*
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva chuckles looking at her confusion, he raises his other hand that was holding the gajra*
Aastha patel (FL)
*aastha eyes lit up as soon as she saw the gajra but she suppressed the excitement and smile on her lip*
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva turned aastha around making her back face him, he moved his hand on her hair gently* /beautiful /
Aastha patel (FL)
*aastha was standing timidly while clutching on to her purse tightly , her eyes downcast and unintentionally...a soft smile formed on her lips, that she suppressed by biting her lower lip*
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva gently placed the gajra on atharva hair, smelling the sweet smell and caressing her hair with his hand, atharva leaned closer to her ear and whispered* ..there my rani sa ..now you look more beautiful
Aastha patel (FL)
*aastha took a deep breath and then said to him in a low whisper like voice* ..thank you ..rana sa
Aastha patel (FL)
*aastha starts walking away from him towards the exit of the temple, taking a last glance at him turning behind* /why do you keep making me feel things today rana sa, why did you appear in front of me after my prayer to mahadev, why rana sa ... even if I feel things I can not forget how we have married then why do you make my heart skip a beat everytime/
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva looked at aastha's back with many emotions in a turmoil inside her, he could feel his raised heartbeat very clearly*
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
ON THE OTHER HAND
IN THE VILLA
Aarya patel (fl's cousin sister)
*aarya was hiding behind the pillar of the hallway near her room which was a spot that was not visible on the CCTV camera, in the last 5 days staying in the room she studied all the hiding spots and the guards' placement*
Aarya patel (fl's cousin sister)
Ragini (maid)
*Ragini as per the plan went inside the room taking the evening snacks and tea inside the room*
*after sometime a loud noise from aarya's room was heard*
Ragini (maid)
guardsss ..guardsss !!!
Ahmed
*Ahmed who was passing by immediately rushed to aarya's room where Ragini was standing in a panicked and nervously* ..what the hell happened !? .why are you shou- ..*his eyes widened and he immediately looked here and there in the room* ...ma'am !!...Where is ma'am , what were you doing !? where is she 💢
Ragini (maid)
Sir , i ..i don't know , i came to deliver snacks as usual ...and aarya ma'am was already gone ...*Ragini said while crying*
*Ahmed immediately informed all the guards in the palace to find aarya and also told the maids to search for her, the whole villa was in chaos searching for aarya*
Ahmed
*Ahmed got a call from the security department that the CCTV of the villa has been disconnected and it was not working* ...fuckkk ..who dared to do this , immediately go the main security department and check everything and also the guards who were assigned for it ..*Ahmed shouts at all the man*
*amidst all the chaos aarya had already gone to the backyard of the villa and the secret door at the opposite end of the villa*
Aarya patel (fl's cousin sister)
*aarya was waiting at the hiding spot in the backyard looking at her watch*
*just then a loud Bang was heard from the other end of the villa* 💥💥
Aarya patel (fl's cousin sister)
*aarya smirks taking the chance and she rushed out of the villa running through the jungle, Ragini had told aarya that all she had to do was run straight through the jungle and she will find the highway on the other end*
While the villa's other end last room had been blasted and all the guards and Ahmed were in chaos searching and investigating everything
*atharva and aastha had reached outside the temple near the parking area*
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva and aastha were at car when atharva got a text message from avyan*
Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)
'don't wait for us, we have left already'
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva turns back to aastha who was looking towards the temple waiting for Amisha and calls for her* aastha
Aastha patel (FL)
*aastha turned towards atharva looking at him confused*
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
Amisha and avyan have left, let's go back
Aastha patel (FL)
What ! ..but rana sa , Amisha asked me to buy the bangles for her , she didn't take them
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
just give them to me , I will give them to avyan tomorrow...*atharva said while opening the car door for aastha*
Aastha patel (FL)
*aastha nodded her head and went inside the car sitting on her place*
Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)
*atharva takes a last glance at the temple remembering the words of pandit ji and gets inside the car sitting beside aastha*
*atharva was a big devotee of Mahadev and he always believes in pandit Jyotinath because since the day he Was crowned , just at the age of 15 .. pandit jyotinath was the only person who has managed to see through him almost every time*
*avyan was driving the car himself, while Amisha was sitting on the passenger seat silently, the guard's car following him from behind and front, he likes to drive the car himself and never trusts anyone else for it*
Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)
*Amisha was looking outside the window all the time, her face emotionless but deep down she knew that her heart broke the day after marriage he declared he will never accept her ..when he ignored her ...when he avoided her...when he never cared ...not a single effort throughout the 3 months of marriage ... when he never missed a chance to taunt her about her status...* ../when he left MY hand ...in the CROWD because of HER voice/
Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)
*avyan was driving through the crowded city at night, his hands were gripping the steering so tight that his vein of the arms popped, his knuckles turned while avyan's eyes were focused on the road*
Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)
*the flashback of the incident running in his mind*
kritika Ahuja ( avyan's assistant)
avyannn ...*kritika shouted from the other side*
Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)
*avyan's eyes narrowed as he looked up at her and left the hands of amisha going towards her*
Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)
*he walked towards kritika standing in front of her*
kritika Ahuja ( avyan's assistant)
Avyan i couldn't connect your pho-
Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)
Miss Ahuja *avyan said in a very cold and stern voice to her* ..I don't remember letting you call me by my name
kritika Ahuja ( avyan's assistant)
Ah ...sorry ..sir , we were not at the workplace so I ..
Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)
*his looked at her coldly while his eyes had the hint of fury on them* workplace or wherever...don't forget your place miss Ahuja ,I HATE when people make do that ...*he said as he remembered something*
kritika Ahuja ( avyan's assistant)
Sorry sir...but I am here to urgently inform you that the salem's have cancelled the deal
Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)
*avyan eyes widened and he clenched his jaw looking at kritika* ..what do you mean cancelled!!? ..why did they cancel a million's worth deal, on the last moment and the heck were you doing, why didn't you inform me earlier !💢 *avyan shouted in anger*
kritika Ahuja ( avyan's assistant)
*kritika flinched but then she says being scared* ..sir , I tried to call but your phone was unreachable and ... apparently, they will give the deal to ...the singhania's company , 'oceanic sky'
Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)
*avyan closed his eyes in frustration as he remembered that he left his phone in the car because it was not allowed in the temple and he whispered* singhania ... ocean- .*Atharva opened his eyes with a jerk* .../ocean/ ....*avyan immediately looked behind him and his eyes widened* ../OCEAN!?/
kritika Ahuja ( avyan's assistant)
yes sir and I was saying I came here especially for you to- ..*kritika was telling him how she came especially all the way here to tell about the deal and for him but she was left mid sentence*
Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)
*he already left the spot running through the crowd and searching for her like crazy* .../fuckkk ..when did I lose her, where is she !?/
Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)
*avyan's heart was beating very fastly and he was looking here and there like a crazy person, He thought she would be following him but she got lost instead* .../oh no ..she is so small and fragile ...how do I find her/
Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)
*he was searching everywhere like a madman, his heart beating loudly , while he felt a mix of emotions of fear, anxiety, frustration and anger rise inside him*
*after searching Amisha for 30 minutes continuously inside and everywhere in the temple, he finally reached the radha-krishna temple near the pond*
*he stops in his track as he looks down at amisha , Avyan notices the man sitting beside him and a sudden surge of anger flows through him*
Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)
AMISHAAA !! ..*avyan shouts from top of the stairs while looking at amisha sitting with a man , he was seething in anger and his forehead sweating and he was panting a little while he looked like he was going to blast any moment*
Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)
*Amisha immediately looks at avyan with her tear filled wide eyes and she stood up in her place looking at him*
Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)
*avyan immediately walked down the stairs , he looked at the man's back for a second but he didn't care less about the man at the moment...and he roughly grabs her hand in anger dragging her with himself upstairs, his heart was beating loudly and a relief washed over his and he held her wrist in a bruising grip*
Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)
*even thinking about that moment back ...his heart started beating loudly while his eyes were focused on the rustling road*
*avyan ....had two big issues regarding Amisha ... attachment issues and separation anxiety ... yes almost an oxymoron ...which was the main reason he got angry when Amisha went to Ranawat palace without telling him ...but avyan was too stubborn and egoistic to admit that as much as he doesn't want to attach with amisha , he can not bear her losing his sight*
Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)
*avyan glanced at Amisha for a second and then turned back his sight on the road, while he said in a cold angered voice*. ..don't you dare leave my side again like that !💢
Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)
*amisha looked at avyan with her jaw dropped a little, for the first time she felt angry when he blamed her for it, the voice of kritika calling him was still fresh in her mind* ..maaf kijiyega..par mera hath aapne chhoda tha ..wo bhi crowd me !!
(pardon me ..but it was you who left my land. ..that too in the crowd)
Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)
*avyan felt a sense of frustration and a hint of guilt which was overpowered by his ego* ..
So what if I left your hand huh ...you didn't have the brain to follow me !💢
Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)
i tried avyan ji , but I got washed off in the crowd *Amisha said in an offended tone and turned her gaze back outside the window*
Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)
right, you are so tiny that you must have flowed with the crowd ..*avyan says with a scoff mocking her*
Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)
💢💢 ..*Amisha she was getting pissed off with his constant mocking and blaming* ...it's not me , it's you who is a giant Titan avyan ji ! 💢
Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)
Hmm ...really ? *avyan raised his eyebrow in amusement with her little comment, he was surprised his sweet little bride can be fiery ball too ..a smirk formed on his lip but he immediately shook his head and turned back to his cold face clearing his throat* ..ahm
Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)
*Amisha just ignored him as she knew he will again mock her or say rude comments ..she instead focused on the night streets*
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Evergreen (author)
Chapter khatammm *in a tired voice* ..my little plantlets 🙃
Evergreen (author)
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Evergreen (author)
For context :
Amisha is 5'1 and avyan is 6'0
few pics aastha and atharva :
Comments
Angela ✨️
He is not bad but I don't know why they are torturing FL's sister
2024-09-29
3
nightmare
wrong character
2024-09-25
1
I Want A Nickname!
well , ignoring oxy.... oh hell yes , until now the guy is a moron!
2024-09-13
6