Written Destiny : A Saga of Crimson Love Episode 16

IN THE TEMPLE

*Amisha and avyan arrived earlier than atharva and Amisha , they were near the car with the security*

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

*Avyan looked hell annoyed and irritated as he was forced by his mother and Aditi to come to the temple with Amisha* *he was busy standing beside Amisha busy on his phone and work*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*on the other hand Amisha was quite happy, she was happy she at least got to come with avyan but looking at his mood and his ignorance ...her smile dropped*

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha just kept looking at avyan, even though he was busy on his phone, for some reason she just wanted to stare at him , her eyes screaming stories behind them ..but it looked like he was not interested in her story*

*while they were waiting at the parking area, atharva and aastha arrived there with the guards, taking both everyone's attention*

*the driver opens the door and atharva for them while Atharva and aastha come out of the car*

Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)

Aastha patel (FL)

Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)

*atharva goes towards avyan giving him a weird look* ..tu mandir me aaya hai ki kisi business meeting me (you have come to a temble or a business meeting )

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

*avyan rolls his eyes and says in an annoyed tone* ..I came here directly from the business meeting, mummy pressured me , tch

Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)

*atharva smirks enjoying his torment*

Aastha patel (FL)

*meanwhile aastha was hugging Amisha very tightly* ..haayee ..I missed you so much my mishu !!

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha smiled brightly and hugged back aastha*. ..me too (⁠✿⁠^⁠‿⁠^⁠)

Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)

*atharva was standing beside avyan looking at both of them hugging and chatting and he says to avyan with a hint of sarcasm* ..ye dono mele me bichdi behen lag rahi hai (these two look like long lost sisters ) *atharva was getting a little jealous of Amisha*

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

Hmm ..*avyan scoffs looking at both of them chatting happily, his gaze was fixated on Amisha and something about that cheerful face was .... annoying him and he was feeling frustrated, he averts his gaze from them*

*after a little while of both of the couples talking, they started going inside the temple, atharva and avyan were walking behind aastha and Amisha who were chatting happily among themselves meanwhile atharva was busy in talks with avyan*

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

agrawal khandan ko achha sabak sikhaya hai tune atharva ...*avyan says while beside him with his hands on the pocket and the usual cold look on his face ...but his eyes were constantly on that one cheerful girl in front of him*

Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)

Don't talk about that in the temple avyan...*atharva smirks at avyan while walking him, his eyes having a dangerous glow on them and*

*the two couples reach inside the temple while they seek the blessings in front of the mahadev's linga*

Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)

*atharva after seeking the blessing from lord shiva, he turns towards the pandit joining his hand and greeting him* ..pranam pandit ji

pandit Jyoti nath

sukhi bhava ...bade dino baad aap darshan ke liye aaye hai *Jyoti nath blesses atharva and says in a calm voice looking at him* ( may you be happy ...you came to seek blessing after a long time )

Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)

Ji ..pandit ji

pandit Jyoti nath

*Jyoti nath looks at atharva for a few seconds and a smile forms on his lips* ...apne andar ki agni ko itna bhi hawa mat dijiye maharaj ...ki wo aapke apno ko jala de ..*Jyoti nath takes a glance at aastha who was praying to mahadev*...maharani me wo kabilayat hai ki wo Raj kar sake ...par khatra hai unke aapki jwala se ( don't encourage the fire inside you so much maharaj that ...it ends up burning your closed ones ) ( maharani is very capable of ruling ..but she is in danger from your fire )

Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)

*atharva furrows his eyebrows and follows his gaze and his gaze softens while looking at aastha ...jyoti nath's word ringing in his brain* /burn the closed ones in my fire ? / .. maharaj apka matl- (maharaj what do you me- )

Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)

*before atharva could complete, Jyoti nath had already left and his gaze turned back to aastha*

Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)

*his steps moving taking towards aastha automatically*

Aastha patel (FL)

Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)

*atharva's gaze was locked on her face as he moved in front of her staring at her with his eyes lost on her serene face , her eyelids close , her hair gently brushing on her face with the air ...and her lips chanting prayer with her*

Aastha patel (FL)

*aastha after finishing her prayer, she slowly opens her eyes with a small smile to seek the glance of the lord but her eyes fall upon the eyes of atharva's deep ocean blue orbs and her world froze in the moment*

Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)

Aastha patel (FL)

*aastha's heart fluttered inside her, she came out of her daze and immediately placed the pallu on her head bending down to touch his feet*

Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)

*atharva's gaze softened further and he immediately bent down holding her hand to stop her from touching his feet and made her stand back, he placed his hand on her face in a gentle manner with a soft smile*

Aastha patel (FL)

*aastha breath hitched at the moment, she had not seen him with a proper smile on his face, she was already completely lost in him as she felt something inside her stir and made her feel things for the first time ever*

Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)

*atharva pulled her a little closer and gently pecked on her forehead with closed eyes* /khud jal ke rakh ho jaaunga mahadev par aastha ko kabhi nahi jalne dunga/ (/i will burn and turn to ash mahadev but I will never let aastha get burn/)

Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)

*atharva leaves aastha and was walking out of the temple with a determination in himself*

Aastha patel (FL)

*while aastha's gaze was fixed on him and she starts walking behind him going out of the temple*

*ON THE OTHER HAND* *Avyan and Amisha ..or rather Amisha had already taken blessings from the temple, avyan had the same cold expression and he seemed completely indifferent looking at the statue of lord shiva ...HE HAD LONG LOST HIS HOPE ON GOD*

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

*avyan starts walking out from the middle of Amisha praying ..he was going out of the temple walking down the stairs with an annoyed face*

pandit Jyoti nath

*Jyoti nath was standing beside the stairs looking at avyan and he smiled , the children of God are such fragile beings that they shatter without any nurture and sometimes ...in their pain , they start breaking the other persons*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha turns to avyan with a worried look immediately rushing towards him walking down the stairs but her steps halt as she hears jyotinath's voice*

pandit Jyoti nath

ateet kabhi kabhi kadva hota hai beti, aur yahi karwahat wo dusro me gholne lagte hai ....par tum apne mithas kam mat karna 😊 (the past is sometimes bitter child , and they start to dissolve this bitterness in others ...but you don't let your sweetness fade away )

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha thinks for a second and she smiles as she understood the deeper meaning behind them , she walked up the stairs and touched the feet of pandit ji to seek blessings*

pandit Jyoti nath

Saubhagyavati bhava ...*pandit ji blesses her*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha smiles as he jyotinath blessed her and she immediately starts Rushing back to avyan*

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

*avyan was walking out of the temple but then he stopped at his place waiting for Amisha, while he looked ahead and it was getting a little crowded*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha walks catching up to avyan with a smile* avyan ji ..sorry wo thoda pandit ji se ashirwad lene gai thi ( sorry , that I went to take blessings from pandit ji )

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

*avyan glances at Amisha , he still had that cold expression on his face, without saying anything avyan held her wrist walking ahead with her through the crowd*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha felt her heart beat getting raised as he held her hand, her gaze fixated on his hold on her delicate wrist, she glances up at him from behind as she was way smaller than avyan, and a shy smile formed on her lips*

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

*avyan was walking with Amisha holding her wrist when suddenly he heard someone call him in a loud voice*

kritika Ahuja ( avyan's assistant)

Avyannn ..*kritika was standing on the other side and she called for avyan loudly*

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

*avyan's eyes shot up at kritika and he furrowed his brows*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha followed the voice too and her smile immediately dropped while she glanced back at avyan*

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

*avyan immediately left Amisha wrist going towards kritika*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha face fell completely while she looked down at her hand*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

Avy- ..*amisha was trying to call for him but he had already gone away leaving her behind while she was getting washed off in the crowd*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*amisha was lost in the crowd while she looked here and there to search for him and she couldn't find avyan , tears forming on her eyes while her mind kept playing the scene of him leaving her hand in the crowd when kritika called for him*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha walked back further searching here and there coming across a small temple on the other end of the huge temple ....it was a Radha Krishna temple and a small pond was in front of it*

*Pond stairs in front of the temple*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha sat down on the stairs as tears rolled down from her eyes while she looked up at the idol of Radha Krishna in front of her inside the temple*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*it wasn't so hard to notice the pain , longing and the vulnerability in her eyes*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

'kya itna aasan tha unke liye mera haath chhodna' ('was it so easy to leave my hand')

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha cried while clutching onto her knees and looking up at sri krishna*

Vyom singhania

*he was looking at Amisha crying for a while now and now he couldn't see her cry and ignore her ...he slowly moved to Amisha and sat beside her maintaining a proper distance*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha sensed someone sitting beside her and she took a glance at vyom and her eyes narrowed, while wiping her tears and turned her gaze to sri krishna again*

Vyom singhania

dil tuta hai ? ...*vyom asks while his gaze was towards sri krishna too and he had a small smile on his face* (got your heart broken ? )

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha doesn't reply to him , her gaze fixated on the Sri krishna as more tears fell from her eyes and her hands clutched onto her suit tightly*

Vyom singhania

Looks like I hit a nerve ...*vyom smiles and gazes at Amisha, he sees the vermilion on her hairline and mangalsutra on her neck* ...looks like you are married...pati ne dil toda (husband broke your heart)

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Anisha was getting irritated now as he kept figuring her out and kept on hitting the hot iron, she wipes her face again and sobs while she turns her gaze towards vyom* ..kaun hai aap ..aur aapko kya farak padta hai jo bhi ho !!! ( who are you ...and why does it matter to you whatever it is )

Vyom singhania

*he smiles and looks at her tear filled pained eyes and then says softly* ...ajnabi hu ...par ek ajnabi behtar hai ...do pal ke liye apna dard bayan karne ke liye ( i am a stranger ...but a stranger is better ..to your pain to him for a while )

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*amisha turns her gaze back to the lord ...and then speaks in a low broken voice* ...kya rukmani ji ko dard hota hoga ? ...jab sri krishna ka naam Radha ji ke saath liya jaata tha ...SHI KRISHNA KI PREMIKA TO WO BHI THI ...log sirf Radha ji ko yaad kyu karte hai ( did it hurt rukmani ji ...when sri krishna's name was taken with Radha ji ....wan't she shree krishna's lover too ..why do people only remember Radha ji )

Vyom singhania

Shayad ...par shree krishna ji apni har ek ardhangini se utna hi pyar karte the ...aur NAAM UNKA BHI LIYA JAATA HAI. ....'SRI' ..*vyom says with a soft smile while looking at sri krishna*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha looks up at vyom a little surprised as she didn't know that 'SRI' was the name of rukmani taken before Krishna's name but then she turns her gaze back to the lord*

Vyom singhania

waise ...aapko kisne bhula diya hai ? ..*vyom asks to Amisha* ( well ..who has forgotten about you )

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha snaps ar vyom in irritation while sobbing* ..Aap jyada mujhse sawal mat ki- ( you don't ask so many ques- )

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

AMISHAAA !! ..*avyan shouts from top of the stairs while looking at amisha sitting with a man , he was seething in anger and his forehead sweating and he was panting a little while he looked like he was going to blast any moment*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha immediately looks at avyan with her tear filled wide eyes and she stood up in her place looking at him*

Vyom singhania

*vyom was still sitting in his place while looking in the front, a smile forms on his place while he mutters* .../lijiye yaad aa gaya unhe/ (⁠◍⁠•⁠ᴗ⁠•⁠◍⁠) (/see now he remembered/)

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

*avyan immediately walks down the stairs and roughly grabs her hand in anger dragging her with himself upstairs, his heart was beating loudly and a relief washed over his and he held her wrist in a bruising grip*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha was caught off-guard as he pulled her with himself, as soon as she reached up the stairs , she turns her gaze looking back on the stairs to see that man ...but it Was empty , he was already gone*

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

*avyan pulled her roughly dragging her out of the temple while his jaw was clenched tightly*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

Avyan ji ..*Amisha calls for him from behind while she is getting dragged, her face still tears stricken*

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

*avyan stops in his place holding Amisha's hand very tightly, he closes his eyes tightly to control his anger, he turns around and pulls Amisha to himself roughly making her collide with himself, he stairs down at aastha due to their height difference* ...yaha waha bhagne ka bahot shauk hai !!! (you love running away here and there !!!)

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha looks at him with her teary puffy eyes and her lips trembling a little* . I didn't run away .. I got lost in the crowd

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

Chhoti bachhi ho tum !! 💢 ..*avyan shouts at Amisha*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*she flinches a little and shakes her head in no*

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

*avyan felt his frustration rise at her innocently shaking her head, but then ...he gazed at her lowered teary eyes, her nose red and dried tear on her cheeks, ...and this made a pull on the strings of his heart, he calmed down a little*

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*Amisha's gaze was still lowered , her hand tightly grabbed by avyan*

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

*abyan gently tilted her face up with his finger and wiped off the tears with his thumb* ... don't leave my side again

Amisha shenoy (fl's bff)

*aastha nods her head while she was shouting in her mind* /you were the one who left me !!!/

Avyan Shenoy (ml's Bff)

*avyan left her and again started walking with her towards the exit with his hold on Amisha's wrist ...still with iron like grip*

______________________________ MEANWHILE BACK ...AFTER ATHARVA LEFT FROM THE TEMPLE AND AASTHA WALKED BEHIND HIM

Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)

*atharva was walking in the front, his mind still running with the words that pandit Jyoti nath told him*

Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)

*he turns his behind to look at aastha*

Aastha patel (FL)

*aastha was busy looking at her love ...the jhumkas and earrings*

Atharva singh Ranawat (ML)

*atharva walks back to aastha standing just behind her while looking at her with a ...hint of adoration*

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Evergreen (author)

NEW CHARACTERS INTRO

pandit Jyoti nath

The temple of the mahadev is an ancient temple, which was built under the royal family's rule Pandit Jyoti nath , has been the priest of the temple since atharva's grandfather jairaj's rule

kritika Ahuja ( avyan's assistant)

Kritika Ahuja : she is 27 years old, assistant of avyan from his company, she has been his assistant for 6 months now .. Meanwhile Amisha is a employee in Shenoy company..since she Was an intern

Vyom singhania

Vyom singhania : he is a mysterious person till now This mystery box will be unboxed further in the story (⁠◠⁠‿⁠・)

Evergreen (author)

Chapter khatamm ..my plantlets ... Bye bye for now the hope the new characters are not exactly confusing , the temple scene will continue in the next chapter

Evergreen (author)

ALSO ONE MORE IMPORTANT INFO !! The side couples will also have a fair amount of screen time, do tell me if you think the main couple's screen time is reduced actually all four couples have their own stories and ... and THERE ARE FEW MORE CHARACTERS and COUPLE THAT WILL UNFOLD WITH STORY