No-no these pov's makes the whole scene present in front of the eyes. They aren't boring. They are much needed to understand the situation and the on going plot and scene. Without them how will one understand who is feeling what and what is exactly going on. They bring the depth to every scene and cause of it one can feel the whole emotion going through. These POVs let you feel the character, be the character and only then you understand their mind. And you are good at writing these POVs. So, don't think otherwise. And thank you so much for your hard work and the way you keep entertaining us by engaging in your story through your writing skills.
2025-09-08
2
MB
Steve is a friend in need and a friend in deed. Henry can't come to you and can't show this as a weakness in front of others but Steve as a friend and as Henry's brother wouldn't let you fall. This guy, for him his brother is his life and you are his brother's life. He is always standing there for both of you. I don't even have words to tell how much Steve's presence is needed in the story. Without him Henry might never make it. He must be dead and his corpse rotting in his grave. But Steve never let him die. For some it maybe cruel but when the ones you cherish are in trouble you just don't leave them. You fight with them for themand from them. That's who Steve is.
2025-09-08
2
MB
I don't think he will kill in front of you but let's see. He is here himself. So, these criminals now understand what kind of problem they are in. You must be someone important otherwise why Henry would be here. They know they are going to get their karma today. And he will be soft as cotton candy for you. But they know he will be as hot as lava for them. Even if it's far away from them it's heat still reaches and burns.
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MB
No-no these pov's makes the whole scene present in front of the eyes. They aren't boring. They are much needed to understand the situation and the on going plot and scene. Without them how will one understand who is feeling what and what is exactly going on. They bring the depth to every scene and cause of it one can feel the whole emotion going through. These POVs let you feel the character, be the character and only then you understand their mind. And you are good at writing these POVs. So, don't think otherwise. And thank you so much for your hard work and the way you keep entertaining us by engaging in your story through your writing skills.
2025-09-08
2
MB
Steve is a friend in need and a friend in deed. Henry can't come to you and can't show this as a weakness in front of others but Steve as a friend and as Henry's brother wouldn't let you fall. This guy, for him his brother is his life and you are his brother's life. He is always standing there for both of you. I don't even have words to tell how much Steve's presence is needed in the story. Without him Henry might never make it. He must be dead and his corpse rotting in his grave. But Steve never let him die. For some it maybe cruel but when the ones you cherish are in trouble you just don't leave them. You fight with them for themand from them. That's who Steve is.
2025-09-08
2
MB
I don't think he will kill in front of you but let's see. He is here himself. So, these criminals now understand what kind of problem they are in. You must be someone important otherwise why Henry would be here. They know they are going to get their karma today. And he will be soft as cotton candy for you. But they know he will be as hot as lava for them. Even if it's far away from them it's heat still reaches and burns.
2025-09-08
2