Hey author, I love your story a lot but just a suggestion, could you maybe be speed it up a little bit ? Your story is lovely and I love it but the thing is that it had been already 130 chapter and we still don’t have any relationship development so it’s kinda very stow. Just a suggestions form a readers pov, cause if you ask me what has happened in the story I wouldn’t be able to say much and also there has only been just a few situations that I actually remember because it was rather interesting for instance the kiss scene. Then again it your story it is up to you how you want to continue. I love your story don’t get me wrong ❤️
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Mara
Hey author, I love your story a lot but just a suggestion, could you maybe be speed it up a little bit ? Your story is lovely and I love it but the thing is that it had been already 130 chapter and we still don’t have any relationship development so it’s kinda very stow. Just a suggestions form a readers pov, cause if you ask me what has happened in the story I wouldn’t be able to say much and also there has only been just a few situations that I actually remember because it was rather interesting for instance the kiss scene. Then again it your story it is up to you how you want to continue. I love your story don’t get me wrong ❤️
2024-08-13
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