author this story is wonderful and excellent but I didn't expect it to be copied by some author . author who copied your work has return same with all the plot but that is not bl that's the only difference and story name : Iam your baby's dad and author name : ;)Jin and I reported it and I hope others do it as the support for the auhtor
2024-11-27
2
Moonlight
Not exactly my type but still a good story. There are so many cliche elements but the good thing about them is that all those cliche events have good endings. Plus the absolute best thing about the story would be the steady rhythm. Like there is no sudden twist and turns just for the sake of the plot. The characters have very well defined personalities that don't break till the end (like in one chapter a character is Sherlock and in the next he is dumb, this kind of thing didn't happen here) which is a good plus point too. Overall a decent book 👍
There are downsides too like the kids feel like they are not taken as an essential part of the family. More like necessary prop characters which are present only because they are very much required to further the plot. They don't integrate well into the plot. There are other small details which don't sit well, such as some reactions of characters to certain situations. But there are also certain situations that are described wonderfully, especially certain emotional situations. So.....................basically not bad. 👍🩷🩷
2024-07-13
6
SUGAR_BEAR
authy i wanna know if Dylan's parents had a crazy love story I mean if Dylan's father also stalked his wife before they got married or was it arranged marriage????
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Pinky
author this story is wonderful and excellent but I didn't expect it to be copied by some author . author who copied your work has return same with all the plot but that is not bl that's the only difference and story name : Iam your baby's dad
and author name : ;)Jin and I reported it and I hope others do it as the support for the auhtor
2024-11-27
2
Moonlight
Not exactly my type but still a good story. There are so many cliche elements but the good thing about them is that all those cliche events have good endings. Plus the absolute best thing about the story would be the steady rhythm. Like there is no sudden twist and turns just for the sake of the plot. The characters have very well defined personalities that don't break till the end (like in one chapter a character is Sherlock and in the next he is dumb, this kind of thing didn't happen here) which is a good plus point too. Overall a decent book 👍
There are downsides too like the kids feel like they are not taken as an essential part of the family. More like necessary prop characters which are present only because they are very much required to further the plot. They don't integrate well into the plot.
There are other small details which don't sit well, such as some reactions of characters to certain situations. But there are also certain situations that are described wonderfully, especially certain emotional situations.
So.....................basically not bad. 👍🩷🩷
2024-07-13
6
SUGAR_BEAR
authy i wanna know if Dylan's parents had a crazy love story I mean if Dylan's father also stalked his wife before they got married or was it arranged marriage????
2024-11-16
0