Laying half nàked under this unknown man, I'm receiving something that I've longed for many years. It's nothing but a loving gaze. His bite marks are everywhere, covering each and every part of my upper body. After every bite he does , he gently cares that spot with his fingers and licks it to ease the pain. How long has it been since someone had done this to me ?
This man, whom I didn't even know his name, is doing something to me. And all I'm craving for is his touches, his warm touches all over my body. And he is doing that. He is caressing each and every part of my body like he's memorizing it, like he's trying to study it. It is almost embarrassing how he keeps licking every part while making eye contact with me
His eyes are shining like a golden Star, so bright. Wait...golden ? Don't tell me he's in his rut
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*Licks zane's lips*
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I'll appreciate it if you could focus on me darling~ *husky voice*
Alpha's ruts are really troublesome. It almost lasts for a week, and it looks like he's a Dominant maybe an Enigma. In that case it will last more than that. I hope it won't trigger my heat too. I don't know what will happen if it does
Why am I getting scared now ? I know that the moment I left with him in the bar that this might happen. This is what I wanted, right ?
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To be continued
Your authy
I know this is kinda confusing and all but trust me , this will get better
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I just wanted to try a different approach of writing , that's all
Not exactly my type but still a good story. There are so many cliche elements but the good thing about them is that all those cliche events have good endings. Plus the absolute best thing about the story would be the steady rhythm. Like there is no sudden twist and turns just for the sake of the plot. The characters have very well defined personalities that don't break till the end (like in one chapter a character is Sherlock and in the next he is dumb, this kind of thing didn't happen here) which is a good plus point too. Overall a decent book 👍 🩷
There are downsides too like the kids feel like they are not taken as an essential part of the family. More like necessary prop characters which are present only because they are very much required to further the plot. They don't integrate well into the plot. There are other small details which don't sit well, such as some reactions of characters to certain situations. But there are also certain situations that are described wonderfully, especially certain emotional situations. So.....................basically not bad. 👍🩷
2024-07-13
2
𝕽𝖚𝖙𝖍𝖑𝖊𝖘𝖘 𝕼𝖚𝖊𝖊𝖓😈
this is my 4th time reading this story... /Chuckle//Chuckle/
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Moonlight
Not exactly my type but still a good story. There are so many cliche elements but the good thing about them is that all those cliche events have good endings. Plus the absolute best thing about the story would be the steady rhythm. Like there is no sudden twist and turns just for the sake of the plot. The characters have very well defined personalities that don't break till the end (like in one chapter a character is Sherlock and in the next he is dumb, this kind of thing didn't happen here) which is a good plus point too. Overall a decent book 👍 🩷
There are downsides too like the kids feel like they are not taken as an essential part of the family. More like necessary prop characters which are present only because they are very much required to further the plot. They don't integrate well into the plot.
There are other small details which don't sit well, such as some reactions of characters to certain situations. But there are also certain situations that are described wonderfully, especially certain emotional situations.
So.....................basically not bad. 👍🩷
2024-07-13
2
𝕽𝖚𝖙𝖍𝖑𝖊𝖘𝖘 𝕼𝖚𝖊𝖊𝖓😈
this is my 4th time reading this story... /Chuckle//Chuckle/
2024-11-01
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Hi
2024-11-17
0