hello, author..... your story theme super interesting! it is have so attractive story line! I love Emma the female lead! she is super strong and badass that why I like her! other characters are so influencing place in story line! you have good writing skill too well, as a reader I have some suggestions! there have some small mistakes in your writing , and also some things make kinda confusing, if you take a proof reading , you can fix it! I am sure, you have interesting story line! so, don't give up and keep writing!
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heather~bobo~
1 yr only?
2020-08-06
1
otaku /army forever ( MTNP)
nice work sis
Reader from mtn community
2020-07-21
1
🎩 MION🎩
hello, author.....
your story theme super interesting!
it is have so attractive story line!
I love Emma the female lead!
she is super strong and badass that why I like her!
other characters are so influencing place in story line!
you have good writing skill too
well, as a reader I have some suggestions!
there have some small mistakes in your writing , and also some things make kinda confusing,
if you take a proof reading , you can fix it!
I am sure, you have interesting story line!
so, don't give up and keep writing!
thank you!
~reader from MTN community
2020-07-12
1