Rewriting Fate - BL Story
Episode 1 - The Truth
Valyrie
Ha! You're so weak! Yet you call yourself a guy?
Little Carlyx
Why can't you guys just leave me alone!?
Zianne
Leave you alone? Hah. You expect us to leave you alone when you're the reason my brother died!!"
Upon hearing what Zianne said, Carlyx stood up with his head down. Then he turned and tried to walk away, but before he could, Noah grabbed his hand and slammed his head his head on the wall. The head impact made Carlyx lose consciousness. Sometime later, Carlyx regained consciousness, but he couldn't see anything. He could barely even move. He then realized that he was tied up and blindfolded. He struggled for a few minutes to break free from the ropes, but it was no use, the ropes were tied really tightly. Instead, he heard a door creaking open and footsteps.
Unknown
Trying to break free huh?
Little Carlyx
I know it's you.
Zianne
You could recognize me by my voice
Little Carlyx
I've known you for 5 years
Zianne
Well I suppose you do
Zianne
But that doesn't matter
Zianne approached Carlyx and remove the blindfold that covered his eyes.
Carlyx glared at Zianne like he was going to kill her.
Little Carlyx
Let me go Zianne
Little Carlyx
This is kidnapping
Little Carlyx
You could get arrested
Zianne
Don't even think that you'll be able to get out of here unscathed
Zianne
Not after what you've done to Zane
As soon as Carlyx heard the name "Zane" he would feel like he was stabbed in the heart.
The memories came to haunt him. Both the good ones and the bad.
Carlyx was getting flashbacks about the moments he spent with this so called "Zane".
He was getting lost in his thoughts when Zianne spoke again.
Zianne
What? What's the matter now? Can't speak anymore?
Zianne said these words to Carlyx with a sarcastic tone. She kept saying bad things about Carlyx to Carlyx himself.
This went on for a few minutes until Carlyx finally spoke.
Zianne
So it's better if you jus-
Little Carlyx
I didn't do it...
Little Carlyx
I didn't kill him...
Zianne
Don't act like a fool
Zianne
You know very well that you are the reason he died
Little Carlyx
YES! I KNOW VERY WELL THAT I AM THE REASON HE'S NOT HERE ANYMORE!
Little Carlyx
BUT I DIDN'T KILL HIM!
Little Carlyx
IT WAS AN ACCIDENT!
Little Carlyx
An accident...
Carlyx voice gradually became quieter.
Zianne
If it weren't for your little pursuer, he would still be alive!
Zianne
If you weren't being such a sl*t, and seducing those people, Zane would still be alive!
Little Carlyx
I didn't seduce anyone!
The sound could be heard across the room, Zianne slapped Carlyx hard.
Zianne
IF IT WEREN'T FOR YOUR ACTIONS, MY BROTHER WOULDN'T HAVE DATED YOU!
Zianne
HE WASN'T EVEN GAY!
Little Carlyx
How would you know he wasn't!?
Little Carlyx
He never even dated anyone before me!!
Zianne
BECAUSE HE HAD A CRUSH ON SOMEONE!
Zianne
AND THAT SOMEONE ISN'T YOU!
Little Carlyx
What do you mean..?
Zianne
He told us once that he had a crush on someone
Zianne
During that time, he looked like he was looking at someone
Zianne
So we followed his gaze to see who he was looking at
Zianne
He was looking near your direction
Zianne
But it wasn't you who he was looking at
Little Carlyx
My sister...?
Zianne
He probably only dated you to get closer to your sister
Zianne
But when your sister told us that she was dating someone, I think that's where he decided to end it
Little Carlyx
He used me...?
Little Carlyx
That's the reason he broke up with me...
During that moment, Carlyx felt like his whole world just collapsed. He couldn't believe that the person he loved and trusted the most was actually just using him. He felt like something just slid down his face from his eyes. It was his tear. He was so shocked and heartbroken that he didn't even know he was crying. At that point, he felt like he just wanted to disappear. After knowing that he person he treasured the most, didn't even care about him at all.
Everything was just a cover up.
Looking at Carlyx state, Zianne felt a little guilty.
But anger and frustration took over her, so she ignored the guilt she felt.
Zianne
You look so pathetic
Zianne
I actually pitied you that time
Zianne
If only you didn't run away and accepted that he didn't want to be with you anymore
Zianne
Maybe things would've been different
Zianne
And he wouldn't have to run after you and got in to the car accident
Carlyx just stayed silent.
He was just there, silently crying and listening to everything Zianne said.
Every sentence she said, made him just want to disappear more.
It hurt so much, that he couldn't bear it, he just wanted to die.
Die and disappear from the world.
Zianne
Either way, you're still the reason he died
Zianne
If it weren't for you, he still would be alive
Zianne
YOU DESERVE TO DIE!
Little Carlyx
Then kill me.
Zianne
What did you just say?
Little Carlyx
I said kill me.
Little Carlyx
If you hate me so much to the point you want me to die, just kill me.
Zianne pulled out a gun from her back pocket and pointed it at Carlyx.
Little Carlyx
Just bring the basket under my bed to Zane's grave
Little Carlyx
That would be enough
Zianne
If that's your last wish before dying, I'll do it
Little Carlyx
That's alright with me
A loud gunshot echoed across the room.
Blood was oozing out the hole that the bullet made on his forehead.
The last thing that Carlyx saw, was too figures rushing over to him and Zianne.
Valyrie
Ha! You're so weak! Yet you call yourself a guy?
Little Carlyx
Why can't you guys just leave me alone!?
Zianne
Leave you alone? Hah. You expect us to leave you alone when you're the reason my brother died!!"
Upon hearing what Zianne said, Carlyx stood up with his head down. Then he turned and tried to walk away, but before he could, Noah grabbed his hand and slammed his head his head on the wall. The head impact made Carlyx lose consciousness. Sometime later, Carlyx regained consciousness, but he couldn't see anything. He could barely even move. He then realized that he was tied up and blindfolded. He struggled for a few minutes to break free from the ropes, but it was no use, the ropes were tied really tightly. Instead, he heard a door creaking open and footsteps.
Unknown
Trying to break free huh?
Little Carlyx
I know it's you.
Zianne
You could recognize me by my voice
Little Carlyx
I've known you for 5 years
Zianne
Well I suppose you do
Zianne
But that doesn't matter
Zianne approached Carlyx and remove the blindfold that covered his eyes.
Carlyx glared at Zianne like he was going to kill her.
Little Carlyx
Let me go Zianne
Little Carlyx
This is kidnapping
Little Carlyx
You could get arrested
Zianne
Don't even think that you'll be able to get out of here unscathed
Zianne
Not after what you've done to Zane
As soon as Carlyx heard the name "Zane" he would feel like he was stabbed in the heart.
The memories came to haunt him. Both the good ones and the bad.
Carlyx was getting flashbacks about the moments he spent with this so called "Zane".
He was getting lost in his thoughts when Zianne spoke again.
Zianne
What? What's the matter now? Can't speak anymore?
Zianne said these words to Carlyx with a sarcastic tone. She kept saying bad things about Carlyx to Carlyx himself.
This went on for a few minutes until Carlyx finally spoke.
Zianne
So it's better if you jus-
Little Carlyx
I didn't do it...
Little Carlyx
I didn't kill him...
Zianne
Don't act like a fool
Zianne
You know very well that you are the reason he died
Little Carlyx
YES! I KNOW VERY WELL THAT I AM THE REASON HE'S NOT HERE ANYMORE!
Little Carlyx
BUT I DIDN'T KILL HIM!
Little Carlyx
IT WAS AN ACCIDENT!
Little Carlyx
An accident...
Carlyx voice gradually became quieter.
Zianne
If it weren't for your little pursuer, he would still be alive!
Zianne
If you weren't being such a sl*t, and seducing those people, Zane would still be alive!
Little Carlyx
I didn't seduce anyone!
The sound could be heard across the room, Zianne slapped Carlyx hard.
Zianne
IF IT WEREN'T FOR YOUR ACTIONS, MY BROTHER WOULDN'T HAVE DATED YOU!
Zianne
HE WASN'T EVEN GAY!
Little Carlyx
How would you know he wasn't!?
Little Carlyx
He never even dated anyone before me!!
Zianne
BECAUSE HE HAD A CRUSH ON SOMEONE!
Zianne
AND THAT SOMEONE ISN'T YOU!
Little Carlyx
What do you mean..?
Zianne
He told us once that he had a crush on someone
Zianne
During that time, he looked like he was looking at someone
Zianne
So we followed his gaze to see who he was looking at
Zianne
He was looking near your direction
Zianne
But it wasn't you who he was looking at
Little Carlyx
My sister...?
Zianne
He probably only dated you to get closer to your sister
Zianne
But when your sister told us that she was dating someone, I think that's where he decided to end it
Little Carlyx
He used me...?
Little Carlyx
That's the reason he broke up with me...
During that moment, Carlyx felt like his whole world just collapsed. He couldn't believe that the person he loved and trusted the most was actually just using him. He felt like something just slid down his face from his eyes. It was his tear. He was so shocked and heartbroken that he didn't even know he was crying. At that point, he felt like he just wanted to disappear. After knowing that he person he treasured the most, didn't even care about him at all.
Everything was just a cover up.
Looking at Carlyx state, Zianne felt a little guilty.
But anger and frustration took over her, so she ignored the guilt she felt.
Zianne
You look so pathetic
Zianne
I actually pitied you that time
Zianne
If only you didn't run away and accepted that he didn't want to be with you anymore
Zianne
Maybe things would've been different
Zianne
And he wouldn't have to run after you and got in to the car accident
Carlyx just stayed silent.
He was just there, silently crying and listening to everything Zianne said.
Every sentence she said, made him just want to disappear more.
It hurt so much, that he couldn't bear it, he just wanted to die.
Die and disappear from the world.
Zianne
Either way, you're still the reason he died
Zianne
If it weren't for you, he still would be alive
Zianne
YOU DESERVE TO DIE!
Little Carlyx
Then kill me.
Zianne
What did you just say?
Little Carlyx
I said kill me.
Little Carlyx
If you hate me so much to the point you want me to die, just kill me.
Zianne pulled out a gun from her back pocket and pointed it at Carlyx.
Little Carlyx
Just bring the basket under my bed to Zane's grave
Little Carlyx
That would be enough
Zianne
If that's your last wish before dying, I'll do it
Little Carlyx
That's alright with me
A loud gunshot echoed across the room.
Blood was oozing out the hole that the bullet made on his forehead.
The last thing that Carlyx saw, was too figures rushing over to him and Zianne.
It seems as if they were talking to him, trying to keep him awake, but he couldn't hear anything.
His vision started getting blurry.
And everything went black.
Hello everyone, thank you for reading my 2nd chat story, I know it doesn't make any sense right now, but as it goes on it would start making sense, as the scenes right now are just fragments of the story. So stay tuned and find out what happens next!
💜 Have a good day/night! 💜
Comments
MoonRose805
Hi everyone. Uhm- I just realized that the story line repeated😅 I'm so sorry for that- I didn't realize it 😅 I don't even know how it got doubled💀 please ignore that... but thank you for reading my story 💜
2022-11-26
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