Rewriting Fate - BL Story
Episode 1 - The Truth
Valyrie
Ha! You're so weak! Yet you call yourself a guy?
Little Carlyx
Why can't you guys just leave me alone!?
Zianne
Leave you alone? Hah. You expect us to leave you alone when you're the reason my brother died!!"
Upon hearing what Zianne said, Carlyx stood up with his head down. Then he turned and tried to walk away, but before he could, Noah grabbed his hand and slammed his head his head on the wall. The head impact made Carlyx lose consciousness. Sometime later, Carlyx regained consciousness, but he couldn't see anything. He could barely even move. He then realized that he was tied up and blindfolded. He struggled for a few minutes to break free from the ropes, but it was no use, the ropes were tied really tightly. Instead, he heard a door creaking open and footsteps.
Unknown
Trying to break free huh?
Little Carlyx
I know it's you.
Zianne
You could recognize me by my voice
Little Carlyx
I've known you for 5 years
Zianne
Well I suppose you do
Zianne
But that doesn't matter
Zianne approached Carlyx and remove the blindfold that covered his eyes.
Carlyx glared at Zianne like he was going to kill her.
Little Carlyx
Let me go Zianne
Little Carlyx
This is kidnapping
Little Carlyx
You could get arrested
Zianne
Don't even think that you'll be able to get out of here unscathed
Zianne
Not after what you've done to Zane
As soon as Carlyx heard the name "Zane" he would feel like he was stabbed in the heart.
The memories came to haunt him. Both the good ones and the bad.
Carlyx was getting flashbacks about the moments he spent with this so called "Zane".
He was getting lost in his thoughts when Zianne spoke again.
Zianne
What? What's the matter now? Can't speak anymore?
Zianne said these words to Carlyx with a sarcastic tone. She kept saying bad things about Carlyx to Carlyx himself.
This went on for a few minutes until Carlyx finally spoke.
Zianne
So it's better if you jus-
Little Carlyx
I didn't do it...
Little Carlyx
I didn't kill him...
Zianne
Don't act like a fool
Zianne
You know very well that you are the reason he died
Little Carlyx
YES! I KNOW VERY WELL THAT I AM THE REASON HE'S NOT HERE ANYMORE!
Little Carlyx
BUT I DIDN'T KILL HIM!
Little Carlyx
IT WAS AN ACCIDENT!
Little Carlyx
An accident...
Carlyx voice gradually became quieter.
Zianne
If it weren't for your little pursuer, he would still be alive!
Zianne
If you weren't being such a sl*t, and seducing those people, Zane would still be alive!
Little Carlyx
I didn't seduce anyone!
The sound could be heard across the room, Zianne slapped Carlyx hard.
Zianne
IF IT WEREN'T FOR YOUR ACTIONS, MY BROTHER WOULDN'T HAVE DATED YOU!
Zianne
HE WASN'T EVEN GAY!
Little Carlyx
How would you know he wasn't!?
Little Carlyx
He never even dated anyone before me!!
Zianne
BECAUSE HE HAD A CRUSH ON SOMEONE!
Zianne
AND THAT SOMEONE ISN'T YOU!
Little Carlyx
What do you mean..?
Zianne
He told us once that he had a crush on someone
Zianne
During that time, he looked like he was looking at someone
Zianne
So we followed his gaze to see who he was looking at
Zianne
He was looking near your direction
Zianne
But it wasn't you who he was looking at
Little Carlyx
My sister...?
Zianne
He probably only dated you to get closer to your sister
Zianne
But when your sister told us that she was dating someone, I think that's where he decided to end it
Little Carlyx
He used me...?
Little Carlyx
That's the reason he broke up with me...
During that moment, Carlyx felt like his whole world just collapsed. He couldn't believe that the person he loved and trusted the most was actually just using him. He felt like something just slid down his face from his eyes. It was his tear. He was so shocked and heartbroken that he didn't even know he was crying. At that point, he felt like he just wanted to disappear. After knowing that he person he treasured the most, didn't even care about him at all.
Everything was just a cover up.
Looking at Carlyx state, Zianne felt a little guilty.
But anger and frustration took over her, so she ignored the guilt she felt.
Zianne
You look so pathetic
Zianne
I actually pitied you that time
Zianne
If only you didn't run away and accepted that he didn't want to be with you anymore
Zianne
Maybe things would've been different
Zianne
And he wouldn't have to run after you and got in to the car accident
Carlyx just stayed silent.
He was just there, silently crying and listening to everything Zianne said.
Every sentence she said, made him just want to disappear more.
It hurt so much, that he couldn't bear it, he just wanted to die.
Die and disappear from the world.
Zianne
Either way, you're still the reason he died
Zianne
If it weren't for you, he still would be alive
Zianne
YOU DESERVE TO DIE!
Little Carlyx
Then kill me.
Zianne
What did you just say?
Little Carlyx
I said kill me.
Little Carlyx
If you hate me so much to the point you want me to die, just kill me.
Zianne pulled out a gun from her back pocket and pointed it at Carlyx.
Little Carlyx
Just bring the basket under my bed to Zane's grave
Little Carlyx
That would be enough
Zianne
If that's your last wish before dying, I'll do it
Little Carlyx
That's alright with me
A loud gunshot echoed across the room.
Blood was oozing out the hole that the bullet made on his forehead.
The last thing that Carlyx saw, was too figures rushing over to him and Zianne.
Valyrie
Ha! You're so weak! Yet you call yourself a guy?
Little Carlyx
Why can't you guys just leave me alone!?
Zianne
Leave you alone? Hah. You expect us to leave you alone when you're the reason my brother died!!"
Upon hearing what Zianne said, Carlyx stood up with his head down. Then he turned and tried to walk away, but before he could, Noah grabbed his hand and slammed his head his head on the wall. The head impact made Carlyx lose consciousness. Sometime later, Carlyx regained consciousness, but he couldn't see anything. He could barely even move. He then realized that he was tied up and blindfolded. He struggled for a few minutes to break free from the ropes, but it was no use, the ropes were tied really tightly. Instead, he heard a door creaking open and footsteps.
Unknown
Trying to break free huh?
Little Carlyx
I know it's you.
Zianne
You could recognize me by my voice
Little Carlyx
I've known you for 5 years
Zianne
Well I suppose you do
Zianne
But that doesn't matter
Zianne approached Carlyx and remove the blindfold that covered his eyes.
Carlyx glared at Zianne like he was going to kill her.
Little Carlyx
Let me go Zianne
Little Carlyx
This is kidnapping
Little Carlyx
You could get arrested
Zianne
Don't even think that you'll be able to get out of here unscathed
Zianne
Not after what you've done to Zane
As soon as Carlyx heard the name "Zane" he would feel like he was stabbed in the heart.
The memories came to haunt him. Both the good ones and the bad.
Carlyx was getting flashbacks about the moments he spent with this so called "Zane".
He was getting lost in his thoughts when Zianne spoke again.
Zianne
What? What's the matter now? Can't speak anymore?
Zianne said these words to Carlyx with a sarcastic tone. She kept saying bad things about Carlyx to Carlyx himself.
This went on for a few minutes until Carlyx finally spoke.
Zianne
So it's better if you jus-
Little Carlyx
I didn't do it...
Little Carlyx
I didn't kill him...
Zianne
Don't act like a fool
Zianne
You know very well that you are the reason he died
Little Carlyx
YES! I KNOW VERY WELL THAT I AM THE REASON HE'S NOT HERE ANYMORE!
Little Carlyx
BUT I DIDN'T KILL HIM!
Little Carlyx
IT WAS AN ACCIDENT!
Little Carlyx
An accident...
Carlyx voice gradually became quieter.
Zianne
If it weren't for your little pursuer, he would still be alive!
Zianne
If you weren't being such a sl*t, and seducing those people, Zane would still be alive!
Little Carlyx
I didn't seduce anyone!
The sound could be heard across the room, Zianne slapped Carlyx hard.
Zianne
IF IT WEREN'T FOR YOUR ACTIONS, MY BROTHER WOULDN'T HAVE DATED YOU!
Zianne
HE WASN'T EVEN GAY!
Little Carlyx
How would you know he wasn't!?
Little Carlyx
He never even dated anyone before me!!
Zianne
BECAUSE HE HAD A CRUSH ON SOMEONE!
Zianne
AND THAT SOMEONE ISN'T YOU!
Little Carlyx
What do you mean..?
Zianne
He told us once that he had a crush on someone
Zianne
During that time, he looked like he was looking at someone
Zianne
So we followed his gaze to see who he was looking at
Zianne
He was looking near your direction
Zianne
But it wasn't you who he was looking at
Little Carlyx
My sister...?
Zianne
He probably only dated you to get closer to your sister
Zianne
But when your sister told us that she was dating someone, I think that's where he decided to end it
Little Carlyx
He used me...?
Little Carlyx
That's the reason he broke up with me...
During that moment, Carlyx felt like his whole world just collapsed. He couldn't believe that the person he loved and trusted the most was actually just using him. He felt like something just slid down his face from his eyes. It was his tear. He was so shocked and heartbroken that he didn't even know he was crying. At that point, he felt like he just wanted to disappear. After knowing that he person he treasured the most, didn't even care about him at all.
Everything was just a cover up.
Looking at Carlyx state, Zianne felt a little guilty.
But anger and frustration took over her, so she ignored the guilt she felt.
Zianne
You look so pathetic
Zianne
I actually pitied you that time
Zianne
If only you didn't run away and accepted that he didn't want to be with you anymore
Zianne
Maybe things would've been different
Zianne
And he wouldn't have to run after you and got in to the car accident
Carlyx just stayed silent.
He was just there, silently crying and listening to everything Zianne said.
Every sentence she said, made him just want to disappear more.
It hurt so much, that he couldn't bear it, he just wanted to die.
Die and disappear from the world.
Zianne
Either way, you're still the reason he died
Zianne
If it weren't for you, he still would be alive
Zianne
YOU DESERVE TO DIE!
Little Carlyx
Then kill me.
Zianne
What did you just say?
Little Carlyx
I said kill me.
Little Carlyx
If you hate me so much to the point you want me to die, just kill me.
Zianne pulled out a gun from her back pocket and pointed it at Carlyx.
Little Carlyx
Just bring the basket under my bed to Zane's grave
Little Carlyx
That would be enough
Zianne
If that's your last wish before dying, I'll do it
Little Carlyx
That's alright with me
A loud gunshot echoed across the room.
Blood was oozing out the hole that the bullet made on his forehead.
The last thing that Carlyx saw, was too figures rushing over to him and Zianne.
It seems as if they were talking to him, trying to keep him awake, but he couldn't hear anything.
His vision started getting blurry.
And everything went black.
Hello everyone, thank you for reading my 2nd chat story, I know it doesn't make any sense right now, but as it goes on it would start making sense, as the scenes right now are just fragments of the story. So stay tuned and find out what happens next!
💜 Have a good day/night! 💜
Episode 2 - Back In The Past
Carlyx
💭: Who's calling me...
Unknown
CARLYX GET TF UP!!
Carla
GET YO' F*CKIN' A** UP BOY!!
Carla
YOU PROMISED TO GO SHOPPING WITH ME!!
Carla
DON'T TELL ME YOU FORGOT!?
Carlyx
💭: I wasn't here last night though...
Carlyx looks around his surroundings, then realized something
Carlyx
💭: Isn't this my old room?
Carlyx
💭: But we moved in to our apartment 5 years ago though?
Carlyx
💭: Most importantly..
Carlyx
💭: How did I get here!?
Carlyx
💭: Didn't Zianne kidnapped me!?
Carlyx
💭: How am I alive!?
Carlyx was lost in his thoughts, confused about how he ended up in that situation.
On the other hand, Carla was getting annoyed.
Carla
Don't act like a statue!
Carla
You promised me last night that you would go shopping with me today!
Carla
We're going to move in, into our new apartment in a week!
Carlyx
💭: Why does this feel so familiar..
Carlyx was trying to figure out his thoughts but before he could, Carla grabbed his hand and dragged him to the bathroom
Carlyx
Can't you be more gentle with your little brother?😑
Carla
You aren't little anymore
Carla
SO HURRY UP AND GET READY
Carla said with a smug face
And then Calryx understood what she meant in a split-second
Carlyx
I don't trust that face of yours Ms. Morgan
Carla
You're a Morgan too so shutup
Carla
YOU'VE ALREADY WASTED 15 MINUTES ON YOUR SNORING
A few minutes later, Carlyx came out and was ready to go
☝️
This is what Carlyx is wearing 👀
☝️
This is what Carla is wearing
They went out into their car
Meanwhile, Carlyx is lost in his thoughts once again
Carlyx
💭: How am I still alive?
Carlyx
💭: I'm sure that wasn't just a dream
Carlyx
💭: This is too confusing
Carlyx
💭: Why does it feel like time just went back
Carlyx
What's the date again today?
Carla
Why are you asking this😑
Carlyx
What year are we on?
Carla
Did you hit your head somewhere 😑
Carla
The heck is wrong with you today?
Carlyx
💭: May 17... 2017...
Carlyx
💭: I WENT BACK TO 5 YEARS AGO!?
Episode 3 - Mall (1)
Carlyx was so shocked by his discovery that he didn't even notice they already arrived at the mall
Carla
What do you mean "what"?
Carla
What the heck is wrong with you today
Carla
We're already at the mall
Carla
Get the f*ck out now😑
They both went out the car, and headed in to the mall
Carla
Where should we go first??
Carlyx
Can we like go get something to it first?
Carlyx
We didn't even eat before leaving
Carla
I guess you're right
Carla
If we're gonna be shopping all day, we need something to give us energy
Carlyx
Did you say "shopping all day"?
Before Carlyx could finish his statement, Carla had dragged him to the small breakfast cafe that was built-in in the mall
This is what it looked like👇
They found a vacant table and sat down
Then they checked the menu that was already placed at the top of the table
A few minutes later, a waitress approached them
Waitress
Hello, may I take your orders?
Carla pointed out a dish from the menu
Waitress
What about you sir?
Carlyx
Uhm can I just have this?
Calryx pointed out a dish on the menu
Waitress
What would you like for drinks?
Carlyx
Can I have a chocolate milkshake?
Waitress
What about you miss?
Carla
I'll have the strawberry milkshake
Waitress
Okay, your orders will arrive shortly
They both said "Thank you" at the same time, as the waitress left with a smile to get other peoples orders
Waitress
💭: What nice kids
A few minutes later, their orders arrived
After their orders arrived, they started eating
As they were eating, Carlyx was lost in his thoughts
Carlyx
💭: Come to think of it, something similar happened 5 years ago
Carlyx
💭: We even ordered the same food
Carlyx
💭: Does this mean that everything that happened in the past 5 years is gonna repeat?
Carlyx
💭: Maybe it will...
Carlyx
💭: I don't think I met him yet
Carlyx
💭: Not at this timeline yet atleast
Carlyx
💭: Come to think of it, what's happening right now is similar to what happened to 5 years ago, but it's not completely the same
Carlyx
💭: If I went back to 5 years ago, doesn't that mean I can change what happened?
Carlyx
💭: I'm not sure, I need to gather more information before making a conclusion
Carlyx
💭: And if I really can change what happened, maybe...
Carlyx
💭: I can avoid Zane from getting caught up in that accident..
Carlyx
💭: But, how am I gonna do that?
Carlyx
💭: We haven't met in this timeline yet
Carlyx
💭: When did we first meet again?
Carlyx
💭: The first day of school at the University!
Carlyx
💭: I have time to prepare then
Carlyx
💭: This is so nerve-wracking
Carla
I've been calling you for about 5 times now
Carla
Really, what is wrong with you today?
Carla
I said hurry up and finish eating
Carla
So we can pay, leave, and start shopping
Carla
We can't just sit here all day
Carla
We were supposed to come to the mall to do some shopping, not just come to cafe for me to watch you staring at your food instead of eating it
Carla
Just hurry up so we can go already 😑
A few minutes later, Carlyx finished eating
So they paid for their food and left
Hi everyone, thank you for reading today's chapter! Next chapter will be out tomorrow, cause' you know~ it's gonna be shopping time ~( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)~
And I need to download pictures for the next chapter, so~
Yeah! Tomorrow next chapter will be out! I'll probably either make the chapter a lil' bit longer or update like 2 or more chapters tomorrow since it's a holiday and we don't have school, so I have a little bit more time in my hands
💜 Have a good day/night! 💜
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