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This poems might be silly but it was memorable for me knowing that it is may first time creating a flower backdraft for my knees birthday and even though this happened it was still memorable.
You can comment about the poem and I will reflect to it but make sure it was acceptable and no curses or foul words because I can understand easily if you want something to be correct but I am sensitive when it comes to the words that is highly sexual, violent and unrespectful.
I highly appreciate your comments and support. I hope you all love my works but af course I will appreciate your corrections abiut the mispelled words and to any wrong grammar.
I will make sure that I will do all my best, thank you!!
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...Poems First Entry ...
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Slipped
I woke up because of those noisy sounds
I was force to stand and wear my top
Running outside to see whose out
Cousin of mine giving me some craft
Running again while holding those craft
I see mom fixing our wet top
I run faster as much as I could
Resulting to an accident that is not good
My foot slipped and I couldn't stop
Mother scream as high as a flying dove
Bruised to my elbow down to my knee
I feel embarassed even only mom can see me
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