sorry to say but Tae's character was so fragile in this story... I didn't like the fact how u have potrayed Tae's character even duh its a short story.... how easily he got melted forgave Jk.... even duh Jk kind of raped him.... Forced sex is rape even duh they were married... coz' of how much fragile & weak u have potrayed Tae's character & the fact Lisa & Suho didn't get their punishment making it really worse.... otherwise ur stories are always awesome but this story is not realistic type at all.... sorry coz' forced sex or rape can't be forgiven & Jk indirectly became the reason of killing his baby so that was so much frustrating when Tae forgave him
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🖤Vincy_im🖤
sorry to say but Tae's character was so fragile in this story... I didn't like the fact how u have potrayed Tae's character even duh its a short story.... how easily he got melted forgave Jk.... even duh Jk kind of raped him.... Forced sex is rape even duh they were married... coz' of how much fragile & weak u have potrayed Tae's character & the fact Lisa & Suho didn't get their punishment making it really worse.... otherwise ur stories are always awesome but this story is not realistic type at all.... sorry coz' forced sex or rape can't be forgiven & Jk indirectly became the reason of killing his baby so that was so much frustrating when Tae forgave him
2022-11-20
3
president of taekook🐅🐇❤️
funny 🤣
2022-10-16
2
Taekook 😍💕
update more 😍😍
2022-09-25
0