Author ur still immature of making stories ... well atleast u say it's ur first... here's some tips... u need to explain first... and put some details to make sure reader's can understand what u wan't them to understand.... and u have an error... Killau just became Killua HAHAHHA😅😂😁
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Author ur still immature of making stories ... well atleast u say it's ur first... here's some tips... u need to explain first... and put some details to make sure reader's can understand what u wan't them to understand.... and u have an error... Killau just became Killua HAHAHHA😅😂😁
2021-05-03
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