author, will you finish this novel or not? because I don't like to 'subscribe' or 'like' work that isn't done. I like the storyline. but to be honest, the prologue made me jump to the last chapter. my suggestion, do not take too long or too many chapters for the storyline before the prologue. people will be bored because they already know in the end she was pregnant and abandoned. make more storyline after the prologue (after pregnancy & abandoned), multiply the intrigue. people will be curious and will continue to be interested in reading it. I hope you don't stop your work just because of negative comments.
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Sofie Imoet
author, will you finish this novel or not? because I don't like to 'subscribe' or 'like' work that isn't done. I like the storyline. but to be honest, the prologue made me jump to the last chapter. my suggestion, do not take too long or too many chapters for the storyline before the prologue. people will be bored because they already know in the end she was pregnant and abandoned. make more storyline after the prologue (after pregnancy & abandoned), multiply the intrigue. people will be curious and will continue to be interested in reading it. I hope you don't stop your work just because of negative comments.
2019-10-05
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