author see plzz no offense but I really wanna say this , what the heck are u writing, means I really liked ur story but now I wanna ask why the heck did u named this story as punishment? huh? this story doesn't make any sense.....in second Life she didn't give any punishment to that king raven and died which made me utterly upset...it's like u just forgot about 20 yrs plot and even if u created a new family for her , u never even open the mystery that why and how the heck she was kidnapped and how did she end up being in that palace than bcoz her mother doesn't seems to have any clue that she is not her real daughter....even if we forget about it, she finally had a chance to be happy but no u didn't even let it happen......and that demon king , I didn't get him till the last moment nad even if we ignore all of that now him , her new father.... means just after ignoring her for yrs , now he is back acting like a real caring father.....means what do you expect us to think???? and now what? huh? I beg of u author plzz even if u take time to do updates , make the plots reasonable and plzz explain them atleast....
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author see plzz no offense but I really wanna say this , what the heck are u writing, means I really liked ur story but now I wanna ask why the heck did u named this story as punishment? huh? this story doesn't make any sense.....in second Life she didn't give any punishment to that king raven and died which made me utterly upset...it's like u just forgot about 20 yrs plot and even if u created a new family for her , u never even open the mystery that why and how the heck she was kidnapped and how did she end up being in that palace than bcoz her mother doesn't seems to have any clue that she is not her real daughter....even if we forget about it, she finally had a chance to be happy but no u didn't even let it happen......and that demon king , I didn't get him till the last moment nad even if we ignore all of that now him , her new father.... means just after ignoring her for yrs , now he is back acting like a real caring father.....means what do you expect us to think???? and now what? huh? I beg of u author plzz even if u take time to do updates , make the plots reasonable and plzz explain them atleast....
2021-03-02
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😋RarW🥵
more plsssᕦ(ಠ_ಠ)ᕤ
2021-03-02
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no drama lama
update author
2021-03-02
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