Surprise !!

" You can leave Steven . and next time before you enter this room make sure to knock " I said very silently . And thank God he left . Once he was out I noticed tears flowing down my cheeks ...

Elina's pov

Next morning I woke up with my mom's soothing words .

" baby .. wake up " I heard my mom said

" umm ... mom let me sleep more .. "

" I have a surprise for you " as long as the word left her mouth I opened my eyes wide ..

" what surprise mom ? are you buying me a new dress for your wedding ? " I said .

" hahaha ! you are still like a child , excited for surprises .. , well no it's not a dress something more special "

" ohhh ... " I said boringly

" do you want a dress? " my mom asked and I nod my head like a penguin .

" ohkay eat your breakfast , we will go for shopping .

" you are the best mom in the world " I kissed on her hands and then get up from bed .

after I freshen up, I changed myself in a flowy dress and do some light make up for shopping .

When I reached at the dining area , I saw Steven was already there for breakfast . Totally ignoring his presence I took a seat far for him The last night incident was still fresh in my mind .

I only eat an apple and juice .

" mom please complete your breakfast fast " I said my mom . I noticed as Steven and David both looked at us in question .

" are you guys have any plans ? " David asked Mom .

" yes , Elina wanted to buy some dresses for our wedding so we are going for shopping " my mom said and I smiled . We were having breakfast and I was waiting my mom to finish , suddenly her ph ringed and she took that . she speak in the phone very seriously , I just watched her . After cutting the phone what she told me just made me sad ..

" baby I think we can't go for a shopping today .. "

" why? " I said being annoyed .

" one of my friend called me and we need to meet it's urgent "

" but you promised me first " I was very disappointed .

" baby it's urgent , we can go next day . I promise "

" it's okay mom , I don't want to go anymore " I was pissed ..

" I'm sorry baby .. "she said but I didn't replied . I just sat there making an annoyed face .

" Elizabeth , if you want I can help you keeping your promise " suddenly Steven break the silent around the table . I looked at him in confusion . " I mean if you want , I can take Elina for shopping " My heart skipped a beat hearing it . did I hear it right ? he want to take me for shopping ? but why ? I was confused .

" That's so sweet of you Steven , of course you can take Elina , she is your sister " I rolled my eyes . I was tired being called his sister .

" okay then fine !" Steven confirmed . and I looked at him as he is real ? like did they don't felt to ask my permission ?

" do you guys even want to know what I want or not ? I don't want to go with him " I said furrowing my brows . What was he trying to prove , that he is a nice brother ?

" Elina ! " my mom said in a serious tone .

" stop being rude , Steven trying to helping you without any interest and .. look at you .." my mom scold me ..

" b.. but mom I'll be bore with him .. " I said making excuses . in no way I'm gonna go with him .

" you'll not be bore , Siya will also be there . " what ? he wants me to go with him when Siya will also be there ?! I was so pissed right now , but I couldn't show it . He again continued saying " actually Siya is asking me this days to take her for shoppings , and coincidentally we fixed today , so Elina can join us " wow what a coincidence ?!(-_- )

" see Siya will be there too , now I hope there is no problem " my mom said being happy .

" but mom .. " I still tried , I don't want to be with them . no Never !!

" do you have any problem with Siya " now Steven asked .. and I just looked at him with Dead full eyes . He knows it better !

" no no Steven you are misunderstanding , Elina is just angry as I'm not going with her . she will go with you two " My mom said and looked at me as ' Don't say another word or .. '

" ohkay. .. " I said in deafet. I was so angry as he win and I loosed .

After breakfast , we both left for shopping . He get in the driver seat and I was about to entered the front seat when he stopped me .

" please sit in the passenger seat behind ,. Siya will seat here . I'll pick up her from her home " I felt humiliated, but I didn't show that and didn't argue I just sit behind. I put on my headphones and listen songs to ignore him . After 15 mins , We received Siya . She smiled at me and I just nod. And soon we reached to one of the best clothes center in town.

We entered the store . Siya entangled her hands with Steven and entered the store and I walked behind . Once we were inside I make myself busy in beautiful dresses and ignore them . I saw alot of dresses but none of them captured my heart . Then my eyes fall on an elegant black dress . It was a side cut long sexy dress , with a deep cleavage . I just fall in love with it at first sight .

" Excuse me , " I call the store asistent .

" yes mam "

" can you .. " before I could say Siya and Steven came and stand behind me .

" can you show me that black dress ? " Siya said cutting me .

" excuse me I choosed that first .. " I said

" umm.. but I was standing behind you just now , I didn't hear you . " Siya said and that made me annoyed

" because you didn't even let me complete my words. " I said trying as polite as I can be.

" this will not suit you Elina , why don't you see something else ? " Now this made me hella pissed .

" how can you say that .. " I said being offended .

" did she said anything wrong ? " now Steven middle his nose in our conversation

" excuse-me ? what do you mean ? "

" Siya said right , this will not suit you . Siya will look best in it even I think this dress was meant to be for her " His words hurt me .. I couldn't believe he said this thing just to hurt me . I know he is trying to hurt me , but the extend he was going made my heart broke . Does he that much hate me ?

" thanks Steven " Siya kissed Steven on his cheeks and that hurt me more .

" excuse me mam , who will take the dress ? " the store asistent asked .

" it's ok. She will took the dress , give it to her "

" but mam you choosed first " she said .

" it's okay just give it to her , it will not look good on me " I said and left the place .

I came to the another side and secretly wiped my tears , I was hurt and humiliated . Hearing this words from Steven made things more painful . I didn't looked for any other dress ,I left the store and wait in front of the car . After few minutes Siya and Steven both came out . Siya was holding 5-6 shopping bags in her hands and there was bright smile on her face , Steven was making a poker face but I couldn't care more . I get inside the car and they also get in and we left that place .

Inside the car I was just looking outside the window .

" Elina , you didn't buy anything ? " she asked

" didn't liked anything " I said boringly , and the one I choosed you two chased that from me .

" ohkay , don't feel bad we can come another time . what say Steven ? " she asked him and I saw him just nod .

" But next time please inform me early for the shopping . okay " she said him and that took my attention .

" inform you ? " I asked

" yes , he just called me 15 mins ago to get ready and told me that we are going for shopping " now that made me shocked , so he just planed all of this just to make me hurt intentionally .I didn't said anymore . Siya left near her house and then only both of us were left in the car .

" so you planed all this , just to insult me and hurt me , right? " I asked trying to stay cool .

" what do you mean ? " he asked being offended suddenly .

"you very well know what I mean . why are you doing this ? just to torture me ? "

" shut up Elina " he raised his voice and I was wondering is he the same Steven . Everyday he was making me shock .

" you have changed Steven .. "

" And what do you expect from me ? yes I have changed , I'm no longer the same Steven you will play with whose feelings , this Steven is not blinded anymore , and I'm happy I'm changed "

" so this is all my fault .. " I hear my voice cracked

" yes your f*ucking fault " he shouted and punched on the steering wheel in anger . I didn't say anything else . Tears fall from my eyes and I wiped it before he could see .

The car ride was silent , soon we reached home . I get off the car before Steven . I walked hurriedly inside the house .

I entered the house and the person I saw sitting beside mom made me surprised . when he saw me he smirked and stand up . I ran to him and jumped into his arms and he also hold me same excitedly .

" Nil ... I missed you so much " I said with happiness . my sad mood lighten instantly seeing him .

" Surprise !! " my mom said and I realized the surprise she was talking about is actually Nil ..

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I hope you guys will be happy with this long Chapter 🤧💓.

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Rodela

Rodela

Now she will play with Steven(guessing). And now get ready for that.

2020-12-10

2

darkness

darkness

now the game will be fair

2023-03-20

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Shierly Lhoi Tiglao

Shierly Lhoi Tiglao

Can't wait for the next update.

2020-05-14

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Episodes
1 meeting the step brother
2 uncomfortable moment
3 Flash back
4 First Meeting
5 Little kitten one date please
6 crazy man
7 you are so stubborn
8 Enjoyment
9 magic in the air
10 you sure want to go further ?
11 good bye
12 who the hell is following me ?
13 Where are you taking me ?
14 You both plotted against me ?
15 Intense love in rain ..
16 It didn't feel right to me
17 He is very caring
18 I don't know how long it will last
19 I never loose what is mine
20 It's so confusing
21 you are gonna regret making me angry
22 You are a liar !
23 I don't want to depend on them
24 I can't accept this
25 I started to keep distance from him
26 End of falshback ( long chapter )
27 This Never gonna happen.. again !
28 you can share it with your mom baby
29 she'll regret to meet me again !
30 It's your job to protect her
31 I need to make things clear between us .
32 Steven's Girlfriend
33 She is perfect for me .
34 Now it's my time to play this game
35 Surprise !!
36 who is he ?
37 he was bheaving like a jealous person .
38 not a Chapter
39 if she wouldn't leave me ..
40 Truth or Dare ..
41 the early I leave the better he will feel ..
42 I'm yours
43 I'm never gonna let you go again ..
44 because you are MINE
45 I want to be in your mind , Heart and everywhere ..
46 Are you planning to leave me ?
47 Good bye .. Elina ..
48 Accident ...
49 the guilt was killing me ...
50 I hoped he will ask me to stay
51 If he stopped me ..I will stay
52 are you real ? not a dream ?
53 only I have the right to love you
54 everything was actually real ..
55 we already know everything
56 Happy Ending
57 Epilogue & New Novel
Episodes

Updated 57 Episodes

1
meeting the step brother
2
uncomfortable moment
3
Flash back
4
First Meeting
5
Little kitten one date please
6
crazy man
7
you are so stubborn
8
Enjoyment
9
magic in the air
10
you sure want to go further ?
11
good bye
12
who the hell is following me ?
13
Where are you taking me ?
14
You both plotted against me ?
15
Intense love in rain ..
16
It didn't feel right to me
17
He is very caring
18
I don't know how long it will last
19
I never loose what is mine
20
It's so confusing
21
you are gonna regret making me angry
22
You are a liar !
23
I don't want to depend on them
24
I can't accept this
25
I started to keep distance from him
26
End of falshback ( long chapter )
27
This Never gonna happen.. again !
28
you can share it with your mom baby
29
she'll regret to meet me again !
30
It's your job to protect her
31
I need to make things clear between us .
32
Steven's Girlfriend
33
She is perfect for me .
34
Now it's my time to play this game
35
Surprise !!
36
who is he ?
37
he was bheaving like a jealous person .
38
not a Chapter
39
if she wouldn't leave me ..
40
Truth or Dare ..
41
the early I leave the better he will feel ..
42
I'm yours
43
I'm never gonna let you go again ..
44
because you are MINE
45
I want to be in your mind , Heart and everywhere ..
46
Are you planning to leave me ?
47
Good bye .. Elina ..
48
Accident ...
49
the guilt was killing me ...
50
I hoped he will ask me to stay
51
If he stopped me ..I will stay
52
are you real ? not a dream ?
53
only I have the right to love you
54
everything was actually real ..
55
we already know everything
56
Happy Ending
57
Epilogue & New Novel
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