hi author!!! u have done great works through this story. the only thing that i want to say is about the comma (,) and full stop (.). pls use it because i found it was very hard for me to read if there's no sign of the comma and full stop. i don't know which one is the new line and it made me took so much time to understand the storyline.😔 i'll keep support your works anyway.
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COCO
hi author!!! u have done great works through this story. the only thing that i want to say is about the comma (,) and full stop (.). pls use it because i found it was very hard for me to read if there's no sign of the comma and full stop. i don't know which one is the new line and it made me took so much time to understand the storyline.😔 i'll keep support your works anyway.
2020-05-02
6
Nami Nami
good job....
2020-03-09
8
Rajkrishika
after long gaps finally you update
2020-03-08
12