I have a hard time remembering names but I manage usually buy giving them tacky names
so the story is nice but the thing is if u want to make the Protagonists feel real-like they too should have a weakness/something they're bad at (the clean-freak is one of it)
😅don feel bad it's jus what I think
I've seen many stories with unbelievable twists and turns out of nowhere! but there should be a reason for someone to attack u (right?) jealousy, old revenge, betrayal from friends etc etc.
now call me sadistic but I would love a protagonist with a dark and gloomy past
😅 I'll stop here or I'll end up demotivating
2021-04-29
0
RianaNinja black
this is good it's better than my , My hero academia story
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DeCk.
think 🤔 or what they do?
2022-12-15
1
White Shadow (Eve) [MAC]
I have a hard time remembering names but I manage usually buy giving them tacky names
so the story is nice but the thing is if u want to make the Protagonists feel real-like they too should have a weakness/something they're bad at (the clean-freak is one of it)
😅don feel bad it's jus what I think
I've seen many stories with unbelievable twists and turns out of nowhere! but there should be a reason for someone to attack u (right?) jealousy, old revenge, betrayal from friends etc etc.
now call me sadistic but I would love a protagonist with a dark and gloomy past
😅 I'll stop here or I'll end up demotivating
2021-04-29
0
RianaNinja black
this is good it's better than my , My hero academia story
2021-03-29
2