This is really awesome, the way they just keep getting entangled in their own peronas is so frustrating but at the same time intriguing bc you want to see who is going to break character next.
Just one of the very obvious mistakes was "creased", it should have been "caressed".
2021-03-19
1
SavageMonster
The description is so good in this chapter. Ngl, that scene was hot. LOL. 🤣🤣
2021-03-14
1
Mrs.Mom
I love your story the description is amazing and beautiful...
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AsunaTwi04
This is really awesome, the way they just keep getting entangled in their own peronas is so frustrating but at the same time intriguing bc you want to see who is going to break character next.
Just one of the very obvious mistakes was "creased", it should have been "caressed".
2021-03-19
1
SavageMonster
The description is so good in this chapter. Ngl, that scene was hot. LOL. 🤣🤣
2021-03-14
1
Mrs.Mom
I love your story the description is amazing and beautiful...
2021-02-24
3