One tiny suggestion: instead of "wait for sometime", which falls a little flat, say it differently. "Wait just a bit" or "Give me a minute" or "Hang tight, I won't be long" all work well. You can even use a phrase like "I'll be back before you know it" or "I'll try to return before you begin eating the covers" ...an ordinary little moment can also be a place where a supporting character's humor or something about them is revealed through their phrasing.
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lemurloki
One tiny suggestion: instead of "wait for sometime", which falls a little flat, say it differently. "Wait just a bit" or "Give me a minute" or "Hang tight, I won't be long" all work well. You can even use a phrase like "I'll be back before you know it" or "I'll try to return before you begin eating the covers" ...an ordinary little moment can also be a place where a supporting character's humor or something about them is revealed through their phrasing.
2021-02-01
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