I really like the part where you all got the punishment, this story is getting more interesting 😂😂 Keep going author Naru
2021-03-30
2
Love Comics 💜
Mmmm... Not bad. Still some grammatical mistakes. And honestly I don't find any character interesting for now. And the part where class gets over. When the bell rang. We didn't know. So I think it's need to be done something. Rest is okay.
~Reader from MTN
2021-01-11
0
Peonies
some grammatical mistakes I have found other all is well.... - mtn community reader
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Jean
Haha 😂 nice one, Ush having crush on life
I really like the part where you all got the punishment, this story is getting more interesting 😂😂 Keep going author Naru
2021-03-30
2
Love Comics 💜
Mmmm... Not bad. Still some grammatical mistakes. And honestly I don't find any character interesting for now. And the part where class gets over. When the bell rang. We didn't know. So I think it's need to be done something. Rest is okay.
~Reader from MTN
2021-01-11
0
Peonies
some grammatical mistakes I have found other all is well....
- mtn community reader
2021-01-10
0