Your English is quite good and am enjoying the story...I don't like cherry being so weal...He should be a bit powerful...so that he can protect his ownself at least!
~Reader From MTN Community
2021-04-23
2
┌∩┐(◣_◢)┌∩┐staedtler (`Д´
I liked how cherry protected himself by escaping, but bunny was my favorite character even though it seems he was the murderer. Cherry shouldn't go out alone in dark deserted alley, take a friend with him at least. Overall i enjoyed the various aspects of cherry's life. English contains no grammatical error.
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𝙸 𝚕𝚘𝚟𝚎 𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚜
2022-09-29
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☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
Your English is quite good and am enjoying the story...I don't like cherry being so weal...He should be a bit powerful...so that he can protect his ownself at least!
~Reader From MTN Community
2021-04-23
2
┌∩┐(◣_◢)┌∩┐staedtler (`Д´
I liked how cherry protected himself by escaping, but bunny was my favorite character even though it seems he was the murderer. Cherry shouldn't go out alone in dark deserted alley, take a friend with him at least. Overall i enjoyed the various aspects of cherry's life. English contains no grammatical error.
~Mtn community reader ☺️👍
2021-03-20
3