I like the overall story. it's interesting and story line is amazing. But the problem is u have some spelling mistakes and also you use fullstops in place of space sometimes which can be confusing to know if it a new sentence or continuation. And I hope u rectify your mistakes then it'll be perfect
~Reader from MTN Community.
2021-01-08
1
☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
The story is quite good and becoming interesting but the thing is that I don't really feel addicted to it...U should try making it mkre mysterious and addictive...And the one more thing which I'll say again is you lack in explaining sometimes
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Ava💕<MTN>
I like the overall story. it's interesting and story line is amazing. But the problem is u have some spelling mistakes and also you use fullstops in place of space sometimes which can be confusing to know if it a new sentence or continuation. And I hope u rectify your mistakes then it'll be perfect
~Reader from MTN Community.
2021-01-08
1
☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
The story is quite good and becoming interesting but the thing is that I don't really feel addicted to it...U should try making it mkre mysterious and addictive...And the one more thing which I'll say again is you lack in explaining sometimes
~~~~Reader From MTN community
2021-01-08
1