In hindi we say bina(without) sir(head) pair(leg) ki story
I really like the plot when she was reincarnated and if you had made some story in those plots that wud have been really good even in this when she got reincarnated for the 3rd time their is no purpose of her reincarnation no proper love story no meaning totally illogical
It makes totally no sense according to me
Pls don't take it as hate i just hope my comment can make you notice the flaws and help grow further and make better stories
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pollo
from where the hell noah came from😑😑
2022-01-04
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pollo
but suddenly from where noah came??
2022-01-04
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Cashew
In hindi we say bina(without) sir(head) pair(leg) ki story
I really like the plot when she was reincarnated and if you had made some story in those plots that wud have been really good even in this when she got reincarnated for the 3rd time their is no purpose of her reincarnation no proper love story no meaning totally illogical
It makes totally no sense according to me
Pls don't take it as hate i just hope my comment can make you notice the flaws and help grow further and make better stories
2021-11-27
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