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♡☆💋нєѕнυ ¢нαηˡᵒᵛᵉˢⁱᶜᵏ«ᴍᴛɴ»☆♡

i can finally understand the characters the FL and ML are quite nice and caring personalitys but the chapters are too short and I can't understand their mind voices like you could have written them btw ** or brackets it would have not been so confusing try to add more pics author

~reader from MTN

2021-01-08

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☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆

I have the grip if each and every characters's nature by now and I think it quite nice to have a kind and understanding male lead. I'll like to tell you some of your writing flaws like you just put some dots and write their action...I mean you just write the things they do as a simple text...If you try writing it like by using brackets or stars or some any other symbols at the startiny of the action words and tge lastvof action words will make us way easier to understand and the readers won't misunderstood the action text with the simple conversation texts.

~~Reader From MTN Community

2021-01-08

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