Hi, again! So sorry for the inconvenience but, may i know when will the results be out?
I'm sort of curious, hehe.
Thank you, all the best for this Contest!~😚
2021-03-15
2
[LEFT MT] TYSM FOR EVERYTHING.
Hi! I want to participate! So here's my personal opinion about the chat story entitled: "Everything started from Bet"
The starting of the story was very nice. Every chapter were simply written but it was worthwhile to read.
I love how the Author also puts great effort to entertain the readers, like when the Author will suddenly pop out of nowhere in some chapters and will talk to the characters of the story though it's not necessary and then the characters will just ask the Author to go away, lol.
I also found some of the chapters adorable and interesting. It's very fun to read and really good!
However, there are some grammatical and typographical errors obtained. But, it's alright 'cause as i am an author myself too, i get a lot of mistakes while writing my stories.
I also loved the conflicts between each characters and like there are many love affairs to each other but they already had their rightful ship, just needs to sail, hehe.
I just thought of also, the story might become more eye-catching to other readers if the chapters will be longer and if it may give us some rollercoaster feelings.
Nevertheless, The story was really wonderful and i liked the plot very much. I am hoping for more updates there and more twist of events.
So, all in all, it was really great!
(I hope i am not too late for this contest~^^)
2021-03-15
5
Future😳
I am gone take part in this Competition so
I want to say that I like that story but it needs more adventurous
I am not saying it's boring ... add some more character if you want bcz it maybe a little tough and Their should more Funny it sounds more like he is jelly person ( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)
he should regret sometimes update more and fast in that story I can't wait longer what is gone happen
Comments
[LEFT MT] TYSM FOR EVERYTHING.
Hi, again! So sorry for the inconvenience but, may i know when will the results be out?
I'm sort of curious, hehe.
Thank you, all the best for this Contest!~😚
2021-03-15
2
[LEFT MT] TYSM FOR EVERYTHING.
Hi! I want to participate!
So here's my personal opinion about the chat story entitled: "Everything started from Bet"
The starting of the story was very nice. Every chapter were simply written but it was worthwhile to read.
I love how the Author also puts great effort to entertain the readers, like when the Author will suddenly pop out of nowhere in some chapters and will talk to the characters of the story though it's not necessary and then the characters will just ask the Author to go away, lol.
I also found some of the chapters adorable and interesting. It's very fun to read and really good!
However, there are some grammatical and typographical errors obtained. But, it's alright 'cause as i am an author myself too, i get a lot of mistakes while writing my stories.
I also loved the conflicts between each characters and like there are many love affairs to each other but they already had their rightful ship, just needs to sail, hehe.
I just thought of also, the story might become more eye-catching to other readers if the chapters will be longer and if it may give us some rollercoaster feelings.
Nevertheless, The story was really wonderful and i liked the plot very much. I am hoping for more updates there and more twist of events.
So, all in all, it was really great!
(I hope i am not too late for this contest~^^)
2021-03-15
5
Future😳
I am gone take part in this Competition so
I want to say that I like that story but it needs more adventurous
I am not saying it's boring ...
add some more character if you want bcz it maybe a little tough and Their should more Funny it sounds more like he is jelly person ( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)
he should regret sometimes
update more and fast in that story
I can't wait longer what is gone happen
2021-01-30
2