Episode 1
She looked at her phone to check what is time it is
Bella
*Ah...7 am? I have enough time then*
Bella
Well...let's do this!
She got out of the bed and went to the kitchen to have some breakfast
She saw a bowl with milk and box of cereal next to it on the kitchen counter
She got closer to it and saw sticky notes on the box
Bella made herself breakfast
While eating she decided to read newspapers to see if something intresting happened
Bella
Oh? They made an article about it?
Bella
I thought they will keep it a secret?
And yes Bella had to transfer
And yes, today is her first day at the new school
First day of the last year
Everybody bothers her with questions about what college she will go to and so on...
There is something she want to be. But it seems silly...
She want to become a detective or a crime inspector...
Or atleast a police officer
Silly...that is something a 3 year old would say if someone asked him what does he want to do in future
But she just feel like that is something she would be really good at
Because Bella is good at 'reading' people
She can tell is someone is lying to her right away
She can determine what does a person do for living at just one glance without that person telling her so
She pay attention to details more than others
It's really annoying to watch detective movies with her cause she can predict what's going to happen and ruin it for herself and others
She is basically a female version of Sherlock Holmes... but also not at all
Since he is a whole lot better at 'reading'people and such
Bella
I have to get ready! I can't be late on my first day! Shiiiiiit
Bella finished her breakfast in a rush and then ran to her room to get ready
She was now standing infront of the school
Bella took a deep breath in
Bella
*Where is everybody?*
Bella
*What?! It's 8:05?! The first lesson already started then!!*
She looked around trying to find Principal's office
Bella knocked on the door and then got in
Principal: Oh? Good morning! What brings you here student?
Bella
I just transferred here...my name is Bella. Today is my first day here
Bella
I was told to come to your office to get my class schedule
Principal: Ah yes! Just. moment. I have to check which class are you even in
She started searching something on her computer while Bella just stood there, waiting
Principal: Bella from Figmentum High School? Right?
She printed something in a piece of paper
Principal: Class 4-3. Here is your schedule
She handed Bella the piece of paper
Principal: I will call your homeroom teacher here and he will lead you to your classroom. So that you don't get lost
She pressed a button on her office phone
Principal: Secretary Lee, please tell the homeroom teacher of Class 4-3 to come to my office
Secretary (through phone): Yes mam, right away
Principal: Sit down for a bit while he comes
Bella did as she was told to
Principal: Do you know anyone from this school?
Bella
Hm? Ah! Yes, actually. I know Hazel. She attends this school
Principal: I think she is in the same class as you
She looked at her computer
Principal: Yes. Class 4-3, Hazel
Principal: That's good right?
She heard knocking on the door
Bella turned around and saw a pretty young man there
Principal: Ah,yes! This a new student. She already knows Hazel from your class, so give her a seat next to her
Bella
My name is Bella. Nice to meet you
Teacher
Ah...nice to meet you too
Teacher
Well let's go to your classroom
Bella got out of the Principal's office following her homeroom teacher
Teacher
Come in when I tell you
Teacher
Class, this is the new student
Teacher
Introduce yourself
Bella
I am Bella. Nice to meet you
Bella
I hope we can get along
Teacher
Ah,Bella you said you already know Hazel from our class, right?
Bella
Yes, we're friends from outside the school
Teacher
Great! Then sit next to her for now. Also, she can show you around the school during break
Bella saw Hazel waving at her
She smiled at her and went to her seat
She whispered when Bella sat down
Bella turned around to put her jacket on the back and of her chair
As she did she noticed a guy sitting beside her, looking at her
But...he wasn't quite looking at her. He had a blank expression on his face
It seemed more like he was.... looking through her?
Bella faced the blackboard again
Bella
*Why can't I read him?*
Usually she could tell at least something about a person she would look at
Like...if that person is into sports and stuff like that. Just basics that are visible from one glance
But this time...not even that
Comments
Luis
At last got to read a long episode ~
I love the fact that she is good at reading people I guess she couldn't sometimes enjoyed her live too .
I already like her ~
Love it author
Reader of MTN
2021-09-04
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kate MTN (R)(P)
A long episode, But it gave a detailed description of what the main characters are like and how are they feeling. I like the description of how how characters feel. what is happening.
overall Language is good. I can't find any visible errors in the narration.
~reader from MTN community
2021-08-30
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🌠ꜱʜᴏᴏᴛɪɴɢ ꜱᴛᴀʀ🌠 🅜🅣🅝🅟
I've got too much to say for this chapter... first those cute messages author showed at the first half, of not getting wifi password if u don't do this and that, and dad facts, I found that really cool... small details attract me most haha. And Bella has really got some special talent, she can see through people!! And being a police officer or related professions are not shameful at all Bella!! Also author, I'd say u should write more of the conversation as talks instead of putting them in the center as text... like u did for the teacher nd Bella conversation... it makes it clearer and less sophisticated to read as well!!
-Reader from MTN Community
2021-08-29
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