At last got to read a long episode ~ I love the fact that she is good at reading people I guess she couldn't sometimes enjoyed her live too . I already like her ~ Love it author
Reader of MTN
2021-09-04
1
kate MTN (R)(P)
A long episode, But it gave a detailed description of what the main characters are like and how are they feeling. I like the description of how how characters feel. what is happening. overall Language is good. I can't find any visible errors in the narration.
~reader from MTN community
2021-08-30
0
🌠ꜱʜᴏᴏᴛɪɴɢ ꜱᴛᴀʀ🌠 🅜🅣🅝🅟
I've got too much to say for this chapter... first those cute messages author showed at the first half, of not getting wifi password if u don't do this and that, and dad facts, I found that really cool... small details attract me most haha. And Bella has really got some special talent, she can see through people!! And being a police officer or related professions are not shameful at all Bella!! Also author, I'd say u should write more of the conversation as talks instead of putting them in the center as text... like u did for the teacher nd Bella conversation... it makes it clearer and less sophisticated to read as well!!
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Luis
At last got to read a long episode ~
I love the fact that she is good at reading people I guess she couldn't sometimes enjoyed her live too .
I already like her ~
Love it author
Reader of MTN
2021-09-04
1
kate MTN (R)(P)
A long episode, But it gave a detailed description of what the main characters are like and how are they feeling. I like the description of how how characters feel. what is happening.
overall Language is good. I can't find any visible errors in the narration.
~reader from MTN community
2021-08-30
0
🌠ꜱʜᴏᴏᴛɪɴɢ ꜱᴛᴀʀ🌠 🅜🅣🅝🅟
I've got too much to say for this chapter... first those cute messages author showed at the first half, of not getting wifi password if u don't do this and that, and dad facts, I found that really cool... small details attract me most haha. And Bella has really got some special talent, she can see through people!! And being a police officer or related professions are not shameful at all Bella!! Also author, I'd say u should write more of the conversation as talks instead of putting them in the center as text... like u did for the teacher nd Bella conversation... it makes it clearer and less sophisticated to read as well!!
-Reader from MTN Community
2021-08-29
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