arthor.... when ever you r talking about a guy... even speaking part with some fuscripton of actions of said make charictor/ guy.... you MUST USE...WORDS LIKE: HE, HIM, HIS, HE IS/ HE'S... boy, man, male...( all male parts if u go that route of wrighting; Addams apple ( the bobble of the throat that's more obvious in men)...3rd leg ( his baby maker part that us used to pee with as well as...other things), chest/6 pack... I am pulling out my hair by the roots with your current grammar structure !!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEASE. FIX!!! thank u
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Stanley Moore
arthor.... when ever you r talking about a guy... even speaking part with some fuscripton of actions of said make charictor/ guy.... you MUST USE...WORDS LIKE: HE, HIM, HIS, HE IS/ HE'S... boy, man, male...( all male parts if u go that route of wrighting; Addams apple ( the bobble of the throat that's more obvious in men)...3rd leg ( his baby maker part that us used to pee with as well as...other things), chest/6 pack... I am pulling out my hair by the roots with your current grammar structure !!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEASE. FIX!!! thank u
2021-06-09
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livinglife
they are lovely ...
2020-11-06
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Mira
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2020-11-06
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